Amfig
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I need help with a story I have been working on at odd moments for a while. One of three or four “in progress” that I hope, someday, to post to Lit.
The theme of the story is the introduction to anal eroticism of a reluctant male by two eager females. I have characters, sketched as follows:
Andrea. Female protagonist #1. A “Lady of Lit” type. She is very open to lots of new ideas and experimental. She is also madly in love with Harold, male protagonist, and is essentially straight and essentially faithful. Her moments of not straight and not faithful are that she has a long standing relationship with Steffie, described below.
Harold, male protagonist. Nice guy, but fairly boring. A “steak and potatoes” kind of guy. In every room of the house, including the bedroom. Loves Andrea and will do about anything for her. Knows about and is ok with her bi relationships with Steffie, though Harold is 100% true blue. Will usually go along with a lot of Andrea’s willingness to experiment, but is usually eager to get back to steak and potatoes. Harold would gladly take andrea to the French restaurnat of her choice, so long as the menu has “biftec” and “pomme de terre.” Harold’s major limit is that he is majorly homophobic. Lives with Andrea’s homoerotic experiments, but no desire for any homerotic experience of his own, or anything that might resemble it.
Steffie, female protagonist #2. Steffie could be the basis for a novel. Used to dance in a strip club, and from there graduated to escort/private entertainment. As both her network and cash built up, she started her current venture-catering sexual fantasies for a select clientele. She may or may not participate in those catered events, depending on whether the fantasy and the client interest her. Steffie is very openly bi, and enjoys it. Andrea and Steffie were in school together, where they had their first pajama parties together. While they are not regular lovers, they are girlfriends who enjoy sex together periodically.
My problem with this story is the beginning. No real outline here. Steffie and Andrea have played around with strapons a few times and enjoyed it. Andrea decides she wants to use one on Harold. Sh attempt to introduce Harold to anal eroticism by fingering his anus while blowing him. Harold, of course, thinks that anything homoerotic, like getting fucked in the ass, by anyone male or female, is just too gay. Over the top. Jumps higher than a virgin looking at John Holmes when Andrea sticks a finger in his ass.
Andrea tells Steffie about all of this. The two of them then decide to train Harold. They seduce Harold into the bedroom and tie him to the bedposts. Steffie tells Harold that “By Monday morning we are going to have you begging for it like a girl.”
The story is the story of the weekend of the training and feminization of Harold, at first unwilling, and eager by Monday morning.
I just can’t get the beginning of this thing to work to get to the Steffie line. Any help? Suggestions? Should I just give up on it?
The theme of the story is the introduction to anal eroticism of a reluctant male by two eager females. I have characters, sketched as follows:
Andrea. Female protagonist #1. A “Lady of Lit” type. She is very open to lots of new ideas and experimental. She is also madly in love with Harold, male protagonist, and is essentially straight and essentially faithful. Her moments of not straight and not faithful are that she has a long standing relationship with Steffie, described below.
Harold, male protagonist. Nice guy, but fairly boring. A “steak and potatoes” kind of guy. In every room of the house, including the bedroom. Loves Andrea and will do about anything for her. Knows about and is ok with her bi relationships with Steffie, though Harold is 100% true blue. Will usually go along with a lot of Andrea’s willingness to experiment, but is usually eager to get back to steak and potatoes. Harold would gladly take andrea to the French restaurnat of her choice, so long as the menu has “biftec” and “pomme de terre.” Harold’s major limit is that he is majorly homophobic. Lives with Andrea’s homoerotic experiments, but no desire for any homerotic experience of his own, or anything that might resemble it.
Steffie, female protagonist #2. Steffie could be the basis for a novel. Used to dance in a strip club, and from there graduated to escort/private entertainment. As both her network and cash built up, she started her current venture-catering sexual fantasies for a select clientele. She may or may not participate in those catered events, depending on whether the fantasy and the client interest her. Steffie is very openly bi, and enjoys it. Andrea and Steffie were in school together, where they had their first pajama parties together. While they are not regular lovers, they are girlfriends who enjoy sex together periodically.
My problem with this story is the beginning. No real outline here. Steffie and Andrea have played around with strapons a few times and enjoyed it. Andrea decides she wants to use one on Harold. Sh attempt to introduce Harold to anal eroticism by fingering his anus while blowing him. Harold, of course, thinks that anything homoerotic, like getting fucked in the ass, by anyone male or female, is just too gay. Over the top. Jumps higher than a virgin looking at John Holmes when Andrea sticks a finger in his ass.
Andrea tells Steffie about all of this. The two of them then decide to train Harold. They seduce Harold into the bedroom and tie him to the bedposts. Steffie tells Harold that “By Monday morning we are going to have you begging for it like a girl.”
The story is the story of the weekend of the training and feminization of Harold, at first unwilling, and eager by Monday morning.
I just can’t get the beginning of this thing to work to get to the Steffie line. Any help? Suggestions? Should I just give up on it?
