Help needed for a new writer.

[MnRider]

Hi,
I have a short story (about 5,000 words) which I would love to have someone help me edit. It is about one afternoon during a couple's skiing trip.

I'm pretty sure it would fall into the erotic couples category. I have sumitted three request through the volunteer editors program over the past 10 days but haven't heard back from anyone so far. (I'm guessing the holidays are a bad time to ask for help )

If anyone has a bit of time please send me a note.
I did read how to "Piss Off an Editor" and I'm pretty sure I won't piss off anyone to much!!

You can PM me or email dave6167@yahoo.com

Thanks

MnRider

 

[CopyCarver]

Incoming!

Low-flying PM approaching at terminal speed. Duck and Cover!

 

[MnRider]

Thank you

Thank you Copycarver.
The story is on the way.
MnRider

 

[CopyCarver]

Email

Thank you Copycarver.
The story is on the way.
MnRider

Rider,
My email seems to be developing new psychoses today. It may be better if you PM the story to me.

 

[MnRider]

CopyCarver,
I couldn't figure out how to send the doc file via PM so I put the story on a web site and sent you the link via your PM.
Thanks again.
MnRider
(Maybe some day I'll figure this stuff out!!)

 

[CopyCarver]

Good story!

CopyCarver,
I couldn't figure out how to send the doc file via PM so I put the story on a web site and sent you the link via your PM.
Thanks again.
MnRider
(Maybe some day I'll figure this stuff out!!)

It's a winner!

The edits are headed for your e-mail as an attachment. The file was too big for a PM

 

[MnRider]

Lost in the mail?

Thank you for working on it so quickly!!!

I just checked my email and so far it hasn't come in. It's possible going thru Literotica and yahoo may slow it down a bit.

I'll send a note when it gets here!

MnRider

 

[MnRider]

Found in the mail

CopyCarver,
I have the edited copy. Thank you very much!
I just gave it a quick look and was very pleased with everything. Trust me, I had a lot more red in college.
I'll send you a note tomorrow after I've had a chance to read it over more carefully
MnRider

 

[MnRider]

Thank you!

Thank you CopyCarver,
I made all the changes you recommended. I think its looks great!
You did a great job.
MnRider

My Story, Memories in the Snow.

 

[Winemaster]

I have also found great help

I just wanted to mention that the criticism I received from other writers was a great help...
good luck



https://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=325294&page=1&pp=25

 

[Winemaster]

story

Mnrider - how do I find what you wrote? or are you sending it out first?

 

[MnRider]

Mnrider - how do I find what you wrote? or are you sending it out first?

Hello Winemaster, My story is posted at Memories in the Snow . I did have CopyCarver edit it, but would love your thoughts and suggestions.

Thank you for asking about my story!
MnRider

btw The volunteer editor program here is wonderful, CopyCarver was very helpful and fun to work with. Anyone writing a story should really take advantage of the volunteer editors here.

 

[Winemaster]

enjoyable story

wanted to tell you that your story is great! I am a skier and will be thinking about it next time I am on the slope with a woman.

 

[MnRider]

Thank you

wanted to tell you that your story is great! I am a skier and will be thinking about it next time I am on the slope with a woman.

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and comment on my story. Here in the frozen Northlands we are getting closer to having enough snow to hopefully do a bit of research. If it warms up to the 20's again!! Right now we would have about 4 minutes before frost bite... [Laughing]

 

[Winemaster]

tooo cold

It sounds like it is a little too cold for skiing.....