HELP!!! I need an explicit story!!!

[luvsaHotSoldier]

My husband is deployed and I want to send him an erotic story to help relieve some pressure..If you know what I mean and I'm sure you do. We have phonesex all the time but when It comes to writing it down I can't put it together. We will be going to a cabin when he comes home for RnR and I was trying to write a story about all the Awesome sex we will have. I love rough sex (not too rough but rough) and he's getting into it. I have read a lot of the stories that have been submitted but haven't found anything that is what I want.. Could someone Help???

Thanks

 

[wehstar]

There is a chance someone can help - but your details are rather sparse. Also, you will be lucky to find someone who can help in the potential timescale you have, I would guess.

More details will create greater interest in your post.

 

[M's girl]

Although I don't have a problem writing down erotic stories (porn is more like it) I sometimes think it's fun to get some help from pictures and/or a movie. For instance, there is this favorite scene from a porn movie called "The Story of Yasmine" (Dorcel) that both M and I think is damn hot. I watched the scene and paused it every few seconds or minutes to write down exactly (!!) what they were doing in detail. Maybe that will help you?

 

[skittles_lm]

Although I don't have a problem writing down erotic stories (porn is more like it) I sometimes think it's fun to get some help from pictures and/or a movie. For instance, there is this favorite scene from a porn movie called "The Story of Yasmine" (Dorcel) that both M and I think is damn hot. I watched the scene and paused it every few seconds or minutes to write down exactly (!!) what they were doing in detail. Maybe that will help you?

What a fun idea!

My biggest piece of advice for you is that you shouldn't read back over what you write. just do it and send it. Things that you will find tawdry or cheesy... he'll love. So be romantic, kinky, slutty, whatever you want and that he will enjoy... and it'll turn out great.

Stay in the tense you start in though, just like writing a story.

 

[AsylumSeeker]

I Wrote A Diddy

I wrote a story in a contest that I so completely misinterpreted. It's about a wife who made a sex video for her husband in Iraq.

It may not be what you're looking for. Here's the link:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=263085

If you can benefit, feel free to make use of it.

My hat's off to you and yours, and best of luck!

 

[subwannabe]

One thing I have done is edit some stories for my own personal use. I also found many stories where half the story was very hot but the other half either didn't apply to my situation or just plain turned me off. Now you don't want to "plagerize" a story and use it somewhere else but I don't see why you can't find a story that would turn you and your husband on and just delete some and rewrite some to your own personal liking and share it only with your husband. This will also give you some experience in writing so that maybe later on you can write something entirely on your own. Once you do that you can start out with very short stories and work your way into longer ones. Personally I get bored easily so some stories are just too dang long for me.

 

[docgbrown]

You forgot something

My husband is deployed and I want to send him an erotic story to help relieve some pressure..If you know what I mean and I'm sure you do. We have phonesex all the time but when It comes to writing it down I can't put it together. We will be going to a cabin when he comes home for RnR and I was trying to write a story about all the Awesome sex we will have. I love rough sex (not too rough but rough) and he's getting into it. I have read a lot of the stories that have been submitted but haven't found anything that is what I want.. Could someone Help???

Thanks

Been there, done that-but flipped. I went to Iraq, my wife sent me stories. While you said you like it rough and he is coming around on it you never said what he likes. If you want him to be really happy, include in your stories what HE likes.

r/

Scrunt

 

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Wow.... Serious Great Effort To Satisfy Your Husband... You Could Record A Story And Send Him A Cd.... For This You Could Use Astory Already Written By Other Authors

 

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Wow.... Serious Great Effort To Satisfy Your Husband... You Could Speak About A Story And Record It Send Him A Cd.... For This You Could Use A Story Already Written By Other Authors

 

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