Help checking my work please!!

[Jessica12317]

Hi everyone I have a story I just finished writing can I possibly get someone to check it for me before submitting? Also a little about it it’s about a Mexican American single mom who is bored with her life and wants to spice it up hooking up with older guys and I’m hoping to make several stories to this and this would be her first one please and thank you I appreciate it a ton!!!

 

[Nouh_Bdee]

A word count would be helpful. If it’s less than 5000 or so, I could find time for it.

 

[Jessica12317]

Oh sorry yeah that would help lol it’s definitely under 5000 words lol

 

[sonda]

I'm positive might not be the best writer around. But i'm very sure i'd love to read your writing.