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[Lady Starlight]

Hi everybody,

I'm new to Literotica.com, and have submitted my first story 'Blind Date.' It's a romance and is the first part of a trilogy. Given below is a link

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=192061

I would really appreciate any feedback you have for me.

Thanks, and happy reading.

Lady Starlight

 

[your_softest_touch]

i thought it was great, it was just a little bit confusing to tell when you were imagining and what was really happening...like when the narrator closes her eyes, it never says she opens them so for a while i thought she was imagining all of it. anyhow, good one.

 

[msboy8]

I R.V.C.ed your story. A good start. Keep writing.

 

[Lady Starlight]

Thanks

Thanks for the feedback...will write more soon.

 

[hydrex]

Hi everybody,

I'm new to Literotica.com, and have submitted my first story 'Blind Date.' It's a romance and is the first part of a trilogy. Given below is a link

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=192061

I would really appreciate any feedback you have for me.

Thanks, and happy reading.

Lady Starlight

don't want to burst your bubble but is it legal to use an already used title?

 

[prettylicious]

hello everyone! also newbie here, hope i am welcome in this board and learn a lot of stuff...