Hello...I'm 27, a poetess and new

[sirensongstress]

Power between your thighs.
I can tell myself lies.
But all I desire is you pounding into me.

Body all aquiver.
Your touch makes me shiver.
But make me wait for I've been such a bad girl.

I should go slow.
Do I want to? No.
Without your passion I'll surelly go mad.

I blush to think of the chaotic moments we shared.
You ripped off my clothes.
My naked body bare,
you suckled every inch,
slapped my ass, and pulled my hair
as we rose up to heaven and fell off into nowhere.


Feedback? Thanks!

Siren Songstress

 

[impressive]

Power between your thighs.
I can tell myself lies.
But all I desire is you pounding into me.

Body all aquiver.
Your touch makes me shiver.
But make me wait for I've been such a bad girl.

I should go slow.
Do I want to? No.
Without your passion I'll surelly go mad.

I blush to think of the chaotic moments we shared.
You ripped off my clothes.
My naked body bare,
you suckled every inch,
slapped my ass, and pulled my hair
as we rose up to heaven and fell off into nowhere.


Feedback? Thanks!

Siren Songstress

Hallooo, 27. I'm an IMPstress. Welcome to the AH. Ya ought to introduce yourself over on the poetry forum, too.

 

[CharleyH]

Hallooo, 27. I'm an IMPstress. Welcome to the AH. Ya ought to introduce yourself over on the poetry forum, too.

Should not the emphasis be placed on impSTRESS? Welcome Siren. The poetry board is a good place. They have a sticky by AnnaSwirls, where you can intro yourself to make it easy, and also there is a 'CONSTRUCTION ZONE' if ever you want honest criticism of your work in order to improve something that you have. (Note that I am not saying this simple piece needs it, I am merely articulating what I find useful over there) plus there's a cool bunch 'o poets.

 

[oggbashan]

Some of us just ain't a poet
This is a way how to show it
If you join the poets' forum
You may find more of 'em.

Og

 

[TheEarl]

Siren: Welcome to the boards. Loved the poetry, although I'm the first to admit my sheer ignorance about the subject. Hope you have fun here.

The Earl

 

[eric shawn listo]

Siren, nice poem. Yes, go to the poerty board. But please come back here and play, too.

 

[yui]

Welcome to the AH, Siren! Nice poem.

Luck,

Yui

 

[sirensongstress]

Great effin' feedback!

Thanks for the feedback everyone. I will look into the other site, as well. Anybody out there interested in sending me a photo they think could incite another sexy poem? I'm always looking for inspiration. I'm open-minded so fire away with your best ones! Thanks in advance. - Siren

 

[logophile]

Thanks for the feedback everyone. I will look into the other site, as well. Anybody out there interested in sending me a photo they think could incite another sexy poem? I'm always looking for inspiration. I'm open-minded so fire away with your best ones! Thanks in advance. - Siren

Hi Siren,

I'm LogoPhile, the word addict. Good to have you here in the AH!

If you'd like to find some inspiring pics, check out the Amateur Pic thread here in Lit's BBS. There's some nice stuff there and you could always put out a request as well and see if anyone takes you up on it. Some people 'round here tend to be camera shy (except Tolyk) and don't usually send pics around... (sorry for the gross generalization, folks, and please correct me if I'm wrong)

Hope you enjoy your stay!

 

[NoJo]

I'm 46, a computer programmer and old.

 

[scheherazade_79]

Welcome to the AH, Siren. I really liked your poem.

 

[oggbashan]

I'm 46, a computer programmer and old.

No, you are not. I was a computer programmer before you started infants school.



Og

 

[tolyk]

Hi Siren,

I'm LogoPhile, the word addict. Good to have you here in the AH!

If you'd like to find some inspiring pics, check out the Amateur Pic thread here in Lit's BBS. There's some nice stuff there and you could always put out a request as well and see if anyone takes you up on it. Some people 'round here tend to be camera shy (except Tolyk) and don't usually send pics around... (sorry for the gross generalization, folks, and please correct me if I'm wrong)

Hope you enjoy your stay!

Heh heh.. well, thanks for the plug Logo

Welcome to the forum Siren, hope you enjoy Lit.

 

[logophile]

Heh heh.. well, thanks for the plug Logo

Welcome to the forum Siren, hope you enjoy Lit.

*ears prick up*

Did someone say

Plug Logo?

Well, if you insist!

 

[SeaCat]

Hello Siren,

Nice poem.
To comment on it would be bad form for me, I'm no poet.
About the pictures for inspiration, take a look at some of the AV's here. They've inspired me more than once.

Cat