a_bent_ampersand
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Hello Internet,
I am an author here at this site and am in the midst of a long strange piece about a particularly disturbed, perverted nineteen year old who is having sex with her father. The stories (in order) are: Temptation's Conquest, Temptation's Contempt, Temptation's Constant, Temptation's Contrition, and I hope Temptation's Confidence posts soon.
This piece was written in direct response to pieces in a similar vein that I felt played domination/blackmail/seduction/manipulation too safely.
I’ve received feedback recently that explains this even better, here’s what I was told this week:
=BEGIN QUOTE=
Hey there,
I just wanted to take the time to applaud your Temptation series. Yvette is a fantastic character, brilliantly devious and sultry.
What I really like is the relationship between Yvette and her dad stays erotically charged. Most stories I've seen along these lines, the femme fatale asserts her control and then just puts her hapless slave through a series of fairly dull humiliations.
I hope there are more installments to come. Thanks for writing this fine series
=END QUOTE=
Well, you’re welcome! I know that Yvette is servicing the numbers of us who kind of smirked when the fucked-upedness fell flat of the erotic. And you’re not alone, many have expressed willingness to follow Yvette wherever she goes… other’s are doing it while covering one eye (which is just fine with me).
The mostly anonymous haters are welcome to keep going, but no amount of complaining is going to stop this story. It'll be ending soon.
These complaints make me wish there was some sort of rating system I could use to tell you that some material may be too intense for younger viewers.
To the anonymous parties:
*no I don’t want to drink piss myself (also goes for poo).
*sorry you pulled up my story and didn’t know it was part of a longer story. Thanks for the rating of “one”, freako.
*Too fucked up?? TOO FUCKED UP?! I recommend you stop reading now.
*Of course she has a motivation! Keep reading.
*If she’s making you sick to your stomach, just skip ahead and fill in those blanks --like turning the sound off when they cuss on television. I feel the sex is important to the drama, but if you can't handle one fucked up thing, chances are you can handle the next one.
*Don’t worry, it’s not a redemption story!
*Yes each chapter starts with the SAME sentence! (The reason for that choice will be revealed)
Whew!
Just had to get that all off my chest. It’s been nine months coming.
Anonymously yours,
A.B.A.
a_bent_ampersand
I am an author here at this site and am in the midst of a long strange piece about a particularly disturbed, perverted nineteen year old who is having sex with her father. The stories (in order) are: Temptation's Conquest, Temptation's Contempt, Temptation's Constant, Temptation's Contrition, and I hope Temptation's Confidence posts soon.
This piece was written in direct response to pieces in a similar vein that I felt played domination/blackmail/seduction/manipulation too safely.
I’ve received feedback recently that explains this even better, here’s what I was told this week:
=BEGIN QUOTE=
Hey there,
I just wanted to take the time to applaud your Temptation series. Yvette is a fantastic character, brilliantly devious and sultry.
What I really like is the relationship between Yvette and her dad stays erotically charged. Most stories I've seen along these lines, the femme fatale asserts her control and then just puts her hapless slave through a series of fairly dull humiliations.
I hope there are more installments to come. Thanks for writing this fine series
=END QUOTE=
Well, you’re welcome! I know that Yvette is servicing the numbers of us who kind of smirked when the fucked-upedness fell flat of the erotic. And you’re not alone, many have expressed willingness to follow Yvette wherever she goes… other’s are doing it while covering one eye (which is just fine with me).
The mostly anonymous haters are welcome to keep going, but no amount of complaining is going to stop this story. It'll be ending soon.
These complaints make me wish there was some sort of rating system I could use to tell you that some material may be too intense for younger viewers.
To the anonymous parties:
*no I don’t want to drink piss myself (also goes for poo).
*sorry you pulled up my story and didn’t know it was part of a longer story. Thanks for the rating of “one”, freako.
*Too fucked up?? TOO FUCKED UP?! I recommend you stop reading now.
*Of course she has a motivation! Keep reading.
*If she’s making you sick to your stomach, just skip ahead and fill in those blanks --like turning the sound off when they cuss on television. I feel the sex is important to the drama, but if you can't handle one fucked up thing, chances are you can handle the next one.
*Don’t worry, it’s not a redemption story!
*Yes each chapter starts with the SAME sentence! (The reason for that choice will be revealed)
Whew!
Just had to get that all off my chest. It’s been nine months coming.
Anonymously yours,
A.B.A.
a_bent_ampersand
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