Hello and Help

[SemiColon]

you know the calibre of the authors here always humbles me. So damn smart. And I gave in to diologue, but only a few lines. it was unavoidable.

 

[ReverieStill]

Wow..my computer signed me in as a name I didn't even know was active...ooops. Long story but asked them to change my name months ago and I guess they did...not trying to "alt" ya.

 

[jomar]

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Just dont give him too many sentences of dialogue. That's the biggest flaw I see in women writing men; overly talky.

Yes, unless you're writing to a style...

You'd better stop overthinking this, and put your quill to parchment, m'dear!

I'm agreeing with Stella all around here. Just let it happen.

I'll try to follow that advice too. Really.

 

[ReverieStill]

I have only three lines I think, all giving instruction. No mention of his motivation at all...much as I loooove to over-emotionalize my men, I know you are right. I am leaving him a mystery.