Hello all, Looking for a editor (one-on-one none BDSM)

[Barrot007]

As above im looking for a editor to help me improve apon a story that i have written some time ago, as well as help with the structure of it. My grammar and such is not to the highest standard and i get caught up when writing so i may lose the plot along the way. This story contains Sex between a Male and a Female on/around a beach setting.

If anyone is able to help me below is a few lines fromthe story if is someting your interested in feel free to contact me for the rest of the story.

Thankyou for your valuable time.

Barrot

(The Story)

she also thought that a swim was in order to cool her off. It was getting late in the afternoon thinking that most ppl would be home she decided to try swimming nude as her friends adn told her was a freeing experience. She grabed her housecoat and headed out the door the baech is a 5 min walk not bad but it hot enough to have her drenched in sweat by the time she got there,she so glad to see that water.

Looking around she saw nobody on the beach or the carpark quickly she slipped off her coat and let it hit the ground walked to the waters edge. As she put one foot in the water a chill ran through her making her nipples harden as the seabreeze blew gently over her naked glistening body. She shuttered and walked futher into the oceans crashing waves. Taking long strokes she swam towards the setting sun for what seemed an eteranity.

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

... If anyone is able to help me below is a few lines fromthe story ...

OK a few pointers.
1) Run a spell check on the story and fix the more obvious spelling errors.
2) Read it aloud. Where you pause for a moment, put a comma. Where you pause a little longer, put a period (full stop).
3) Take out all the abbreviations and replace them with whole words. This is a piece of literature, not a txt msg.

Then it will be ready for an editor to look at it.