Actual_Mom
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- Apr 27, 2017
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I didn't know if I really should make any of my stories available for public consumption. I have several stories that I've done over many years but I know I'm not a "writer". I really don't know what I'm doing - but when I'm doing it, I can see the movie playing in my mind's eye and wondered if it was just me.
Anyway - all that to say thank you to one reader that took the time to provide feedback. It meant a lot to me and has led me to submit one more part to the story and perhaps another couple soon to follow.
Here it is - again. a sincere thank you
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Comments:
I've just finished reading...and then re-reading your two stories about a young man and his (step) grandmother creating a safe place and must tell you that both sections are among the most erotic stories I've read in a long while.
The characters you've created have physical and emotional attributes that give them a wonderful level of reality. For those of us who have an innate, lifelong appreciation for the mature woman, the Carol you've created is the perfect grandmother/fairy god-mother.
I love that you've not portrayed her as a 66 year old woman with the physical attributes of a younger woman. You've gifted her with physical and emotional characteristics of woman-hood. You've gifted her a beautiful level of reality. Despite having little experience in such a sexual relationship, by providing encouragement and support, she assumes the role of (sexual) mentor for her grandson, in their mutual exploration of his fetishes.
I confess that I was so focused on your portrayal of Carol that I've paid too little attention to the grandson, beyond recognizing his sexual persona to be something of a mirror image of my own at the age.
A great challenge for any author is to create links between the reader and the characters of the story that bond the reader to the story. You achieve that wonderfully in both story submissions. Your portrayal of both Carol and grandson cause the reader to care about them, their relationship and their journey.
I most sincerely hope that you will be blessing us with more chapters of this journey.
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Edit - almost forgot
For anyone so inclined to read them - so you don't have to hunt for them ....
Part 1 : https://www.literotica.com/s/our-safe-place-pt-01
Part 2 : https://www.literotica.com/s/our-safe-place-pt-02
Edit
The next chapter has been added
Part 3 : https://literotica.com/s/our-safe-place-pt-03
Anyway - all that to say thank you to one reader that took the time to provide feedback. It meant a lot to me and has led me to submit one more part to the story and perhaps another couple soon to follow.
Here it is - again. a sincere thank you
- - - - -
Comments:
I've just finished reading...and then re-reading your two stories about a young man and his (step) grandmother creating a safe place and must tell you that both sections are among the most erotic stories I've read in a long while.
The characters you've created have physical and emotional attributes that give them a wonderful level of reality. For those of us who have an innate, lifelong appreciation for the mature woman, the Carol you've created is the perfect grandmother/fairy god-mother.
I love that you've not portrayed her as a 66 year old woman with the physical attributes of a younger woman. You've gifted her with physical and emotional characteristics of woman-hood. You've gifted her a beautiful level of reality. Despite having little experience in such a sexual relationship, by providing encouragement and support, she assumes the role of (sexual) mentor for her grandson, in their mutual exploration of his fetishes.
I confess that I was so focused on your portrayal of Carol that I've paid too little attention to the grandson, beyond recognizing his sexual persona to be something of a mirror image of my own at the age.
A great challenge for any author is to create links between the reader and the characters of the story that bond the reader to the story. You achieve that wonderfully in both story submissions. Your portrayal of both Carol and grandson cause the reader to care about them, their relationship and their journey.
I most sincerely hope that you will be blessing us with more chapters of this journey.
- - - - -
Edit - almost forgot
For anyone so inclined to read them - so you don't have to hunt for them ....
Part 1 : https://www.literotica.com/s/our-safe-place-pt-01
Part 2 : https://www.literotica.com/s/our-safe-place-pt-02
Edit
The next chapter has been added
Part 3 : https://literotica.com/s/our-safe-place-pt-03
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