Having Hope...a spin off?

[SynnDee]

I have recently submitted a story and although all the comments were positive most asked for more. It got me to thinking. I hadn’t considered writing more. I would love for some ideas. Should Hope stay with both Mike and Devin? Should Mike decide to remove himself from the equation? Would you give the twins a major role? Looking for any ideas?

 

[nakdsub]

Don't you think...

It would be a good idea to include a link to the story so we at least have a clue as to what we're talking about?

 

[lazyhobo]

It would be a good idea to include a link to the story so we at least have a clue as to what we're talking about?

Very clearly in his signature.

 

[nakdsub]

Most people aren't...

Going to go looking. If he wants the feedback the story should be made readily available.

 

[lazyhobo]

Going to go looking. If he wants the feedback the story should be made readily available.

What do you mean go looking? its clearly right there, There's basically nothing else in that signature, and his post is empty. If he even posted a link, you'd have a link, signature line, then another link.

Yes, he probably should have posted a link, but for this particular story at this particular moment, nobody should have any trouble finding the story. So don't worry too much about it and either read it or leave it.

 

[nakdsub]

Why would he post a link to his signature line?

Why not just post a link to his story and make it easy for people?

http://www.literotica.com/s/having-hope-1

There, I did it for him and it wasn't hard at all. I don't know why this has to turn into something adversarial, I'm just trying to help him.

 

[lazyhobo]

Why not just post a link to his story and make it easy for people?

http://www.literotica.com/s/having-hope-1

There, I did it for him and it wasn't hard at all. I don't know why this has to turn into something adversarial, I'm just trying to help him.

I never said it was hard, I did say that maybe he should have. But rather than post a pointless post you could have read his story and offered idea s for a spin off.

 

[lazyhobo]

I have recently submitted a story and although all the comments were positive most asked for more. It got me to thinking. I hadn’t considered writing more. I would love for some ideas. Should Hope stay with both Mike and Devin? Should Mike decide to remove himself from the equation? Would you give the twins a major role? Looking for any ideas?

I read you're story, I was very satisfied with how it started. I was mildly satisfied with the ending. But It was all up and down through most of the story, especially with the fathers personality.

I'd say that if you do any spin offs, you should keep it to other people or their sexual excapades. I wouldn't continue any drama between the three.

IE what I meant by keep it to other people was, Hopes friend, show a sexual experience between her and her sister? or perhaps, her father that seemed to like Hope, maybe let him and his daughter (s) have some fun.