Have your say on my next chapter (Fantasy based)

[FlyAwayFromHere]

I have recently written my first NC/R story. I am undecided which way i want to take it, so i thought i would let you guys have a say.

Note: Please read the story first so you know the theme and characters before suggesting anything. Feel free to vote/comment/suggest things on the thread, but if you want to seriously suggest a theme for the next installment please post here.

Here is a few things to think about:

-Where should the characters relationship go?
-Where should the theme be set?
-What sexual activities should they try?
-Should it continue to be NC/R?
-Should we introduce new characters into the mix?


I would really like to know your opinions peeps!!

Clicky:

http://www.literotica.com/s/medieval-ch-01


P.S i didnt really know where to post this, but i thought this might be the most accurate.

 

[Cowboy4x4]

Jmho....

I have recently written my first NC/R story. I am undecided which way i want to take it, so i thought i would let you guys have a say.

Note: Please read the story first so you know the theme and characters before suggesting anything. Feel free to vote/comment/suggest things on the thread, but if you want to seriously suggest a theme for the next installment please post here.

Here is a few things to think about:

-Where should the characters relationship go?
-Where should the theme be set?
-What sexual activities should they try?
-Should it continue to be NC/R?
-Should we introduce new characters into the mix?


I would really like to know your opinions peeps!!

Clicky:

http://www.literotica.com/s/medieval-ch-01


P.S i didnt really know where to post this, but i thought this might be the most accurate.

-Where should the characters relationship go? To me I would think your characters could fall in love with each other... I mean say the male Matt there is already in love with her, has been for awhile and he got his opportunity to actually have her for himself, That and the fact his riches would be increased as well... Make him a war hero that the king is rewarding for his service to the kingdom IE he gave his blessing and all to him for her..... Make her pissed off more about having to marry so young just to give daddy's throne a aire ECT ECT....

-Where should the theme be set? create your own time zone, or hell make it a different dimension and or planet....

-What sexual activities should they try? Ohh man now that is a question right there, I mean the sky could be the limit on that. Anal, doubles, you could turn her into a t total slut whore that obeys his every command and does the entire western army in two weeks. I mean that would all depend on where you actually want your story line to go. But then again if you are wanting to go further and further with this story you wouldn't want to go that route. Make it where he teaches her the joys of sex with each other.

-Should it continue to be NC/R? no I wouldn't you have something there in this story, I like the fact that you let me hear their words both at the same time. I just think you could go in a much different direction that the way you originally thought.

-Should we introduce new characters into the mix? Ohh yes, yes yes my friend. Hell the sky is the limit right there, IE an evil character that kidnaps her and rapes her maybe and her knight in shining armor comes and kills the bad guy and they make love on horse back coming back from the evil bastards castle perhaps? Or a few supporting charterers as well. A stable boy that is a peeping tom and catches her relieving herself one time and she enjoys it, she plays with herself in front of him and he blows with out even touching himself or something along that lines?

Hope I have been helpful. When I write I live by one rule. "My story my rules", I personally think you have a heck of a start on a really fun storyline. I actually look forward to reading the next chapter......

 

[FlyAwayFromHere]

thanks for the input. you have some really good ideas there, and i shall be using some of them. Te next chapter is out, its called TrueFantasy Ch.02 as i have changed the title. very happy you enjoyed it.