Hats off to WickedEve and DonnaQT!

[Uncle Pervey]

Well, you lovely devilishly wicked Lasses you, you've done it again Eve, and Donna, you're at fault too! How do I explain those wet spots on my sheet again? Grin. I read,
October Odyssy 2"
by my WickedEve, and yes! Naughty naughty! Wicked indeed, grin! As usual, very good! And the,
Pleasures of the Net"
by the sweet and passionately lovely new cummer, oops! I mean comer DonnaQT is more than worth a careful reading by any descerning readers, such as myself! My many thanks to you lovely erotic inspirations of U 2 lovelies! Yours in full devotion, and dreams of fantasy, Uncle Pervey, "DOME!"

 

[WickedEve]

I think (without checking) her name is Dana and not Donna. Actually, Donna is my name. Wicked Donna... nooo... Eve works better.
I'm glad you liked the poem. Was it erotic? I wrote it weeks ago and submitted it without really reading it again. Check out my sig line. That one is more erotic.
Now I have a request. I want you to play a little game with me. I want you to write an erotic poem without rhyming. Yes, free verse. And there are taboo words. You can't use pussy, cock, passion, lust, heart, burning, fire and desire... those kind of words that you see in so many "erotic" poems. And don't actually describe the act of fucking! And no fucking your family! lol A man brushing his lover's hair can be erotic. You know those little things that lead to bigger things. Anyway, make me happy and do it. Even better, write something to make me wet.

 

[Uncle Pervey]

Well my lovely girl...?

Well, I'll try to strain my brain sweet girl, but I've always had a tgreat deal of difficulty with what you call free verse? Is that the right description, or name? Anyways Doll, I'll give it my best shot, oops! There I go again, smile. Take care Love! Uncle Pervey, (DOME!"

 

[average gina]

I think (without checking) her name is Dana and not Donna. Actually, Donna is my name. Wicked Donna... nooo... Eve works better.
I'm glad you liked the poem. Was it erotic? I wrote it weeks ago and submitted it without really reading it again. Check out my sig line. That one is more erotic.
Now I have a request. I want you to play a little game with me. I want you to write an erotic poem without rhyming. Yes, free verse. And there are taboo words. You can't use pussy, cock, passion, lust, heart, burning, fire and desire... those kind of words that you see in so many "erotic" poems. And don't actually describe the act of fucking! And no fucking your family! lol A man brushing his lover's hair can be erotic. You know those little things that lead to bigger things. Anyway, make me happy and do it. Even better, write something to make me wet.

Oh dad gum it, you said between you and him, huh Eve. (You could have put 'Wicked Sheniqua' and it would have worked, lady[mentally bows down to your absolute genius ability]) I had just checked one of mine for all of those words, too. Ah well...

 

[Angeline]

I think (without checking) her name is Dana and not Donna. Actually, Donna is my name. Wicked Donna... nooo... Eve works better.
I'm glad you liked the poem. Was it erotic? I wrote it weeks ago and submitted it without really reading it again. Check out my sig line. That one is more erotic.
Now I have a request. I want you to play a little game with me. I want you to write an erotic poem without rhyming. Yes, free verse. And there are taboo words. You can't use pussy, cock, passion, lust, heart, burning, fire and desire... those kind of words that you see in so many "erotic" poems. And don't actually describe the act of fucking! And no fucking your family! lol A man brushing his lover's hair can be erotic. You know those little things that lead to bigger things. Anyway, make me happy and do it. Even better, write something to make me wet.

up to your old tricks, i see.

 

[WickedEve]

up to your old tricks, i see.

tricks? me? I'm just trying to persuade a fellow poet to try free verse and leave the kin folk out.