fallen lover
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Very intense... any thoughts on these? Any chance we could have comic stories or artwork by writers here?
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fallen lover said:Any chance we could have comic stories or artwork by writers here?
fallen lover said:Very intense... any thoughts on these? Any chance we could have comic stories or artwork by writers here?
You want realism on Literotica, Sv'a?Svenskaflicka said:... Also, I think it's badly drawn. It's unproportional, lacks real characteristics, and the mouths looks totally unrealistic in the blowjob pics.
Thumbs down. This isn't good enough.
Svenskaflicka said:I don't like these. They're stereotype and racistic, with black men being portraid as sex-starved monsters, with dicks the size of arms, and white blondes getting all turned on by being called things like slut and bitch.
Also, I think it's badly drawn. It's unproportional, lacks real characteristics, and the mouths looks totally unrealistic in the blowjob pics.
Thumbs down. This isn't good enough.
Akito01 said:Even though programs like Flash and Photoshop give me every chance to work in color, I have to admit I still like the classic B&W look of Japanese manga.
The story around Anna333 is blatantly inspired by Chobits, and the allure of an artificial woman made-to-order, devoid of faults and will, and the real woman who has to compete for a man's affections.
I would like to have as much artwork as text, ideally. I really want the art there basically to provide a sense of atmosphere and wonder, rather than a vehicle for pornography -photos do a better job of that, and I can write far better explicit material than I can render in a sketch. But I like the idea of using the image of the woman as a kind of paper doll, matching the fact she is a mechanical doll in the story. Again, I know there is a danger in being too abstract for a genuinely effective erotic story, which is why I hope to counterpoint it all with the intervention of the real life womain in the story.
betelguese said:I have been interested in posting some comic stories, have done a lot over the years and am busy putting together a pay site after I have had a huge amount of mail asking me to post the lot up.
Ive attached one animated gif which preceeds any story.