Harry Potter

[Dickers]

I wrote a story about Harry potters adventures after he killed voldermort and before he married ginny. The story was not accepted by literotica but if anyone is interested in reading it and giving me feedback, please pm me with your email address and I will forward to you. If I get enough responses, I may finish the second part.

 

[Dickers]

bumpty

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

Ummm... Two things...

We have enough to read just with the new stories posted every day and the stories posted here asking for feedback.

Secondly, why would you continue with part 2 before you figure out what's wrong with part 1? Don't you think you'll make the same mistakes?

 

[Dickers]

I do not think that there is anything wong with the story. I have had the story edited by a literotica editor and it is all good. The story is is a little unique, that is why I have written about this in the forum. It is about the mixing of sex and magic, something not written about before(i believe).
Literoctica just have a policy of not accepting any material written about harry potter.

 

[OzoneRed]

Have you considered posting at http://www.fanfiction.net or http://www.adultfanfiction.net?

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

I do not think that there is anything wong with the story.

Have you ever heard of Kiddy Porn? Harry Potter is a kid. There is no rule against writing Harry Potter stories, but there is one about underage sex.

If you want to have a Harry Potter story posted on Lit, you have to make him obviously older than 18 and put a note in the Author's Comments.

Then, guess what? You don't have a Harry Potter story anymore. Harry Potter is a kid. If he's over 18 he's not a kid anymore. You are doing the old "Write stinker of a story and use some Celeb name and everyone will think it's cool." Doesn't work. Now Go Away!

 

[fieryjen]

It is about the mixing of sex and magic, something not written about before(i believe).

You've got to be kidding me. You think this is unique?

I can't even recall how many story of this type I've read, but trust me, there's millions out there.

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

Jen and Dickers,
This is the real problem. Your story was rejected. We have more than enough to do dealing with 75 new stories posted every day, without dealing with your rejection. You need to go back to your editor and get it posted.

This attempt to circumvent the system isn't going to work with us. It you want to get your story posted because it's so well written and fabulous, either fix it so it can be accepted by Lit or go to www.storiesonline.com and post it there.

Now go away.