Halloween tease

[centrum1000]

A young girl is left to be watched by her brother on halloween when their parents go to a party. After he ditches her she decides to make to most of it an go trick or treating alone. She doesnt have much for a costume, school outfit/girl scout uniform, but quickly realizes how much attention she is getting. Throughout the night she shows a little more at each house and even has some fun with a few guys along the way.

 

[Vielle]

Sounds like fun! She is 18 of course.

And what if her brother finally tracks her down and has to punish her?

Oh my gawd, I have such a one track mind . . .

 

[BedtimeStories77]

So, to be Lit legal, this eighteen year old girl needs her older brother to babysit her while the parents are out, he ditches her, so she goes trick or treating in her Girl Scout uniform where she flashes the home owners...

 

[emap]

Yeah this needs help.

So how about this, the parents are going to a party, the daughter had a date but her boyfriend had to cancel, the son was stuck with staying home to hand out candy. So after the parents leave he does as well because she can handle the candy so now she's sitting there handing out candy to occassional kids and watching a bad halloween movie.

Bored out of her skull she puts on the costume she was gonna go out with her boyfriend in and takes a walk for candy and ends up with sex instead.

 

[centrum1000]

This sounds like progress

I never meant that she was as young as the idea implied. A sexy girl having some fun on halloween

 

[mikeaday]

sounds cool emap. she could have put on the costume and then headed out to get candy as it reminded her of when she was younger. the first couple of houses she goes to she just gets candy but then something strange starts happening. instead of candy she starts getting money.

she figures that she better do something for the money as she doesnt feel right just taking the money. she starts undoing buttons and showing cleavage. every house takes a photo (the camera being handy from earlier innocent pictures of trick or treaters).

by the time she gets to the final house she hasnt much on and decides to have sex with the owner. just as shes about to go in the brother could grab her and drag her home. he had found out what she had done as most of the pictures that had been taken were already uploaded.

He then takes some photos of his own and they can have sex or just taking the photos

 

[subwannabe]

How about the girl gets stuck home alone handing out candy to the kids. She gets bored and puts on her sexy french maid outfit. Some fathers come along with their little kids for treets and catch an eyefull. She sees one and offers for him to come back later without the kids.

 

[BedtimeStories77]

I never meant that she was as young as the idea implied. A sexy girl having some fun on halloween

Well, you did say her brother had to babysit her and that she chose to go trick or treating in her "young girl" uniform... But it's good to know you didn't want a story about a kid!

 

[centrum1000]

I like both ideas, they could even be two different chapters. One year she goes out and has a little fun. The next year she stays at home but remembers how much fun she had the year before so gives a show to the fathers who come by.

 

[centrum1000]

An 18 year old girl, home from college, has to stay home on halloween to babysit her younger sister while their parents go out to a party. Her sister falls asleep early and she gets bored. she decides to go out trick or treating but she doesn't have a costume. The only thing she can think of is one of her sisters outfits, cheerleader/girl scout/school uniform, that is a bit small but still fits.

Each house she goes to, for some reason its all men answering the doors, she notices the mens stares and decides to show off. She gets bolder with her exhibitionism as the night progresses and takes things even further, first giving a few guys head and then fucking some.

When she gets home, her mom is already alseep but her dad catches her sneaking in. After seeing her outfit, he suspects he knows what shes been up to and decides to punish her. She uses some of the tricks she learned earlier in the night to get out of trouble...

 

[NASCARaddicted]

it could be like: she is 18, but in the eyes of her parents, she is still a young, innocent girl.

They tell her, that her older brother will babysit her while they go to a halloween party. She is against the babysitting, but her parents are very strict.

As soon as the parents left, the brother also leaves. She doesn't want to go to a party, but she wants to get some candy. So she goes out to trick or treat.
Like centrum1000 said, she has no real costume, but she still has her old cheerleader/school girl/girl scout outfit. It is almost too small for her, so the outfit is very tight.

At the first few houses, she receives candy (maybe more then usually) but then at one house, a single guy opens. He tells her, he has no more candy, but maybe he could give her something else - like for example a beer. The girl turns that down, but they keep on talking. Suddenly, the guy (turned on by her tight outfit) starts to talk about her outfit. Like for example, he asks, if she ain't freezing in that skimpy outfit. He says, the outfit is so tight, she probably ain't wearing a bra, since he can't see the outlines.

The girl becomes horny - and she wants to do something dirty to prove her parents, that she is an adult. So right on the front porch, she lifts her shirt to show that the she really ain't wearing a bra.
The guy can't contain himself, he has to touch her boobs.
And then, the girl asks this guy something unexpected: "Can I give you a blowjob, please?"
Of course, he accepts and so the girl opens his pants and gets his cock out. She starts to give him a blowjob right on the front porch. Suddenly, the door on the neighbors house open - and her parents come out. They are totally shocked when they see their own daughter with this guys cock in her mouth ...

 

[BedtimeStories77]

An 18 year old girl, home from college, has to stay home on halloween to babysit her younger sister while their parents go out to a party. Her sister falls asleep early and she gets bored. she decides to go out trick or treating but she doesn't have a costume. The only thing she can think of is one of her sisters outfits, cheerleader/girl scout/school uniform, that is a bit small but still fits.

Each house she goes to, for some reason its all men answering the doors, she notices the mens stares and decides to show off. She gets bolder with her exhibitionism as the night progresses and takes things even further, first giving a few guys head and then fucking some.

When she gets home, her mom is already alseep but her dad catches her sneaking in. After seeing her outfit, he suspects he knows what shes been up to and decides to punish her. She uses some of the tricks she learned earlier in the night to get out of trouble...

So, let me ask this...

What is it about the young Girl Scout uniform that excites you, centrum? I think that is the real question that needs to be asked. That's what you keep coming back to.

First, the main character was a young girl being babysat and she sneaks out to trick or treat and show off in front of old men... Next, there's an eighteen year old adult babysitting her little sister who leaves the child home alone and takes her little girl clothes to trick or treat in front of old men...


This is just my opinion here, but I think any element of this story should be void of children and/or their clothing and image.

 

[centrum1000]

Promiscuous, beautiful, young (legal age is still considered young to many of us you know) women in short skirts is a turn on for a lot of people. I'm not judging your tastes, you might try the same.

The story outline is within the bounds if the rules here, and quite frankly its much more tame than a lot of what is on here!

If you find yourself offended, then that is your right. But I did not expect such judgment here of all place.

Now back to the story, any talented writers want to help a guy out here?

Your work will be greatly appreciated.

 

[BedtimeStories77]

I am not judging you. I am going off of what fact was offered in your posts. You have a desire for Girl Scout uniforms. I was a Girl Scout from age six to seventeen; Brownies to Seniors. No eighteen year olds or older adults are a scout, nor did any of the troop moms wear a uniform.

Yes, a story about an eighteen year old young woman is "Lit legal". And yes, I know many people are attracted to and obsessed with youth. (Sadly, many are attracted to very young youth as well.) However, if you claim a character is eighteen, but make her 4' 9" and 95lbs with nothing more than nubs on her chest most likely the owners of the web site with deny the story.

I did say it was simply my opinion that any mention of children/under eighteen looks, clothing, descriptions was a bad idea and should probably be avoided. To each their own, and all that. If the character sounds like a kid or an adult "role playing" as a kid the site owners will say "NOPE!"

 

[subwannabe]

I am also a believer in realism. It doesn't sound real that this girl goes out trick or treating and finds nothing but men answering the door. In reality most men would be hiding somewhere letting someone else hand out the candy. Most also wouldn't be peeking out the window looking for a young woman in a skimpy costume. However there is still much to work with with this idea, including giving new meaning to the words "trick or treat".