~~Haiku River~~

[My Erotic Trail]

in memory of "Dueling Samurai" <grin, once a 'shoot out' turn to dueling haiku. The new "Dueling Haiku" trail~~~~

a collection of small thoughts in a big way~~~Haiku River~~

ribbon of current
tranquility in droplets, gathered
the Haiku River

 

[bluerains]

in memory of "Dueling Samurai" <grin, once a 'shoot out' turn to dueling haiku. The new "Dueling Haiku" trail~~~~

a collection of small thoughts in a big way~~~Haiku River~~

ribbon of current
tranquility in droplets, gathered
the Haiku River

______
moonsoaked mulberries
gathered in purple crow night
feed mockingbird streams

 

[wildsweetone]

imprisoned by banks -
amniotic thoughts
blinkered




(hmm i think i'll put the red wine away)

 

[My Erotic Trail]

excellent <grin

aqua blue river
overwehlming current
carries me away

 

[wildsweetone]

streamed to the sea -
whelmed widower,
floating debris






(i need to look up haiku *cough, splutter* rules, methinks.)

 

[Remec]

Afloat~
pale globe trailing
stinging death

 

[bluerains]

seed returns to sea
spiraling within life’s thirst
aquatic womb reaps

 

[wildsweetone]

the moon descended to drown in the river

 

[My Erotic Trail]

hugging the eddy
lapping at the shore
in a river's bed

 

[bluerains]

sheets of rain falling
liquid sunshine overflows
in river swells of blue

 

[My Erotic Trail]

a swelling river
chokes the grass and sand
to hug the trees

 

[wildsweetone]

Night River

yellow orb illuminations -
the slither of a silver trail

 

[My Erotic Trail]

silver trail adrift....<grin
flowers swim in the current
drawn to the horizon

 

[wildsweetone]

silver trail adrift....<grin
flowers swim in the current
drawn to the horizon

okay, i get it i think... finally.


drawn horizon bends –
a ladle gathering cardinal sins

 

[bluerains]

eeh...

okay, i get it i think... finally.


drawn horizon bends –
a ladle gathering cardinal sins

when you get it...it can become addictive....tis my favorite form of pens..


water fowl plunder
trails of aquatic ribbons
and cold blooded prey

http://www.mwf.mb.ca/images/waterfowl_lg.jpg

 

[wildsweetone]

when you get it...it can become addictive....tis my favorite form of pens..

sorry, i meant i understood the terms of this thread, finally. to pick a line or part of a line from a previous haiku and make a new one from it.

i am still learning the haiku form. jthserra's submissions are giving me much to think about.

 

[wildsweetone]

water fowl plunder
trails of aquatic ribbons
and cold blooded prey

deer, prey of crocodile,
drink brown water -
cooled.

 

[My Erotic Trail]

white water's rage
assaults stone and shore
pools to tranquility

 

[wildsweetone]

a flood zone pool
branch dips deep
dragging water

 

[bluerains]

water beasts afloat
dead from flood’s raging river
nature equilized

http://www.thisisull.com/thisistheworld/africa/zimbabwe/nyami/img/kariba1.jpg

 

[My Erotic Trail]

water beasts afloat
dead from flood’s raging river
nature equilized

http://www.thisisull.com/thisistheworld/africa/zimbabwe/nyami/img/kariba1.jpg

wow blue, that looks like the river out my back yard <grin

 

[bluerains]

wow blue, that looks like the river out my back yard <grin

really..do you still have damage from the hurricane...

 

[My Erotic Trail]

really..do you still have damage from the hurricane...

well, actually they did an inspection after the hurricane of the damn, they found small cracks but suspect they were there before the storm, with funding they are doing the repairs and drained the lake to nothing more than the origianal river, it is wicked to look at the lake with stumps across a dry/moist marsh and no water except what cuts right through the dead <looking> lake is the river. The trees look like those in your pic, bare and dead and been burried under water for years, now they seem as a dead tree grave yard.

 

[bluerains]

roots reawaken
as life give up the spirit
form is forever

 

[My Erotic Trail]

a river flows
earth's pulsing veins
constantly carving