Guys and Dolls

jessy19

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Ok we always see toy stories featuring women with dildos and vibrators but I'd love to see someone write a story about a young guy using a toy like a rubber doll or something...it'd be sexy as hell to read at least for me it would *s* So maybe one of you can write something like that *s*
 
I think this is actually a really good idea, though I realize it is certainly going to be something of a niche subject.

A little embarrassed to say that I have had some real life experience in this area. The darn things never seemed to last all that long, but I did manage to have some fun. The key really is to put a lot of work into the fantasy aspect of it, and that probably is the key to writing a story based on doll-sex as well. I managed to get a really cool black satin-style dress at a Goodwill, and along with a sweater and some pantyhose, managed to create a nice illusion. Since doll-sex is basically masturbation, it has as much to do with what's going on in one's mind as what one does physically with the object. I have one masturbation story already posted, called Solitary Habits, where I tried to meld those aspects into a single narrative.

What I really find fascinating are those Real Dolls, though they are far too off from my price range, and certainly wouldn't be a welcome addition to the home now that I'm married and all. But one can do things with a doll, or at least imagine doing things with a doll that one might not with a live partner. Bondage games can be fun if you deflate them to just the right level. Using a blind fold on them also helps solve the biggest problem with the dolls I had, which is their face and hair. That probably requires the greastest level of imgaination and creativity to overcome.
 
I do find the subject quite hot even though they used to say that only geeky boys fucked rubber dolls. I am thinking of doing the story myself but if anyone wants to do it by all means *s*

I was thinking of making the guy really hot like a jock or something..and supposedly he'd be smooth with the ladies but deep down he's got a huge fear of having sex. He gets home one night and practices on his beautiful rubber doll oooh the descpritions would be soo hottt mmmm *dreams away* Ok that's all fo now if anyone got more ideas please post em here :)
 
I was thinking the movie "Manakin" might be an interesting kind of twist. Make the Doll have actual pesonification at least to the person who uses the thing.

Originally I thought this was going to be based on "Guys and Dolls" like the play. He, he what was I thinking! Good different idea though. I don't think there is a big market for the man toys but one never knows. Maybe it is a blow up doll of his sister, LOL.
 
Interesting

Good idea jessy something different, but it will be hell to write, I don't think I could do it. Easy with visuals in a film, but making it convincing with one sided dialogue and reams of narrative etc is going to be work. Good luck to anyone who's tries it.:cool:

I had a blow up doll once, bloody useless, I gave her a love bite, she farted and flew out of the window.:D
 
Well I'm actually on page 3 of my doll story :) I think it sounds kinda corny so far but who knows maybe someone will like it ;)
 
jessy19 said:
Well I'm actually on page 3 of my doll story :) I think it sounds kinda corny so far but who knows maybe someone will like it ;)

if you finish and it stil seems corny, go back and double up the sex scenes. guaranteed we all love it then.
 
Well I only got 4 pages done and it's going to make this a very short story. If someone can give me some ideas to use i'd appreicate it. I dont' want my character to be with any real females though that'll defeat the whole purpose of the story *s*

Oh Dolly!

Greg ran his fingers through his dark curly hair out of frustration. He sat alone in the college library going over is Anatomy study guide. He was lucky to have gotten into a decent college because of his football talent. The only hard thing was trying to keep up his grades.

He sighed and looked around noticed two pretty brunettes eyeing him from across the room. He felt his face turn red and quickly looked back down to pretend his was studying. He felt their eyes on him and heard them whispering and giggling. He decided to just get up and leave back to his room.

While most guys on the football team had sexy nympho girlfriends, Greg would rather be single and try to keep his grades up. He'd been asked out by a lot of girls on campus, but for some reason he always felt so shy. He wasn't sure if it was the strict family environment he came from or if that was just the way he was.

He was very handsome. He was 6'0" and weighed 180lbs with nothing but muscle. His eyes were dark gray with long eyelashes. He was basically a guy most girls would automatically drool over and long to be with. He'd been asked out by many girls and he'd also managed to date a few but he hadn't found that one girl who he could be himself around.

As he walked back to his apartment, he could tell it was getting dark outside. It would be another Saturday night alone, but he wanted to be ready for the killer Anatomy test on Monday. He rushed upstairs and once in his apartment, he was able to breathe. College life had been hard to adjust to. Being 18 and on your own wasn't as fun or easy as they said it would be.

He threw his backpack on the floor and lay on his bed looking up at the ceiling. He smiled remembering the pretty brunette girls. He'd had a few girlfriends but nothing too serious. Just some heavy petting followed by him fingering or receiving a hand job. He wanted to sleep with a girl and experience the feel of a hot female pussy, but he was scared to death to have sex with just anyone.

Greg sat back up on his bed and pulled off his white polo shirt. It felt good to be alone once again. His muscular chest and washboard stomach had a nice golden tan. He kicked off his shoes and took his socks off. There was nothing more comfortable than being able to walk around naked.

He was about to go get something to drink and get back to studying, but he felt an urge. He felt a strong urge to jerk off. He could feel his cock hardening in his pants. His hand moved down and rubbed the hardening cock.

"Mmmm yeah!" Greg moaned as his hand massaged his aching cock.

Suddenly his face turned red and he knew what he wanted to do. He bit his lower lip and smiled. He kneeled down to look under his bed. There she was. Her name was Dolly a 5-foot inch blow up doll. He grabbed her by her hand and pulled her out. She was wearing a short little black dress that he bought from the Goodwill one time to make her seem more beautiful.

"Hey there, I've missed you," he said teasingly as he looked at the doll.

Her eyes were dark blue and she had blonde color on her head as hair. Her lips were dark red and very pouty. He sat the doll on his lap and put his arms around her. He cock was throbbing now more than ever.

"Did you miss me? I hope you did because I'm going to fuck you so good tonight Dolly." He continued to talk to her while he smiled seductively.

"Look just how hard you make me. My balls are aching right now ready to shoot my spunk in you Dolly."

He leaned down and kissed the doll. His lips met with her so perfectly. He kissed her first with soft pecks. Then his tongue glided her lips and he only wished she had a tongue to touch his. His heart was pounding now as he made out with the pretty doll.

"You look so sexy tonight Dolly. I think you'll look sexier without your clothes on." He began to unzip her dress and his eyes grew wide as if fell off her and revealed her rubber breasts. They were a peach color with dark brown hard nipples. He took the nipples in his fingers and played with them.

"Hmmm you like that don't ya Dolly? I can see that you wanna get fucked too."

The little dress fell on the floor and Greg stood up to lay the doll down on the bed. She lay there so obediently with her legs wide open just for him. Greg squeezed his cock and stared at his doll for a moment. He took off his pants and boxers. His hard cock was pointing straight as he eyed the doll.

"Are you ready to take my cock Dolly? Once again I'm going to fuck you like never before. You don't know how much you turn me on!" Greg rasped.

He got in between the dolls legs and positioned his cock on her rubber pussy. It was just a plain drawing of a pussy between her legs with a tiny and tight hole for him to fuck. He pushed his cock in and moaned loudly. She was very tight and so willing.

"Ahhh yeah! Oh baby you've been wanting this dick haven't you?" Greg groaned.

He moved his hips back and forth as her pussy swallowed up his cock nicely. He grabbed her legs and wrapped them around his waist pulling her closer to him.

"Hmmm yeah! Take my cock you little slut! Take it like you want it!" He shoved his cock faster inside of his doll. His hands grabbed her rubber tits and he closed his eyes for a moment imagining himself fucking one of the brunettes that were at the library. He could only imagine how their tits felt.

"Oh Dolly! Yeah! I want you to milk my cock baby! Oh baby I wanna cum so hard in you!" Greg's voice was shaky and he was getting more turned on as he imagined being inside one of the brunette's pussy.

…I bet her pussy would feel so warm! So tight and she'd cum all over my cock….

He was pumping the doll with his cock with all his might. With each thrust the doll shifted a bit making it hard to control her.

"Oooh your such a slut Dolly! Oh my little fuck whore! Tighten your pussy Dolly! Squeeze my cock with your pussy! Oooh fuck!"

Greg was breaking a sweat now. His heart was racing with lust and desire. He wanted to hard and let all his cum shoot out inside of his doll. She'd been his sexual release for the past few months. Hell not only was she hot, she didn't' talk back and he could fuck her as much as he wanted. Oh she was perfect!

His moans were the only thing that could be heard in the silent room. He was grabbing the dolls tits hard while he kept fucking her violently.

"Take it bitch! Take my cock you fuckin' skanky little slut!" He shouted to her looking at her with a mix of anger and lust.

Greg was beginning to feel weak and his cock was throbbing with passion. He did a few more hard thrusts and suddenly his toes curled and he bucked his hips trying not to cum so fast but it was too late. He felt long hard ropes of hot cum shooting of out his cock and into his doll.

"Mmmmm oooh god! I'm cumming! I'm fuckin' cumming in you! Take my cum you fuckin' cunt! Oh yeah!" Greg grunted.

He kept pumping his doll with shorter thrusts until he slowly felt his cock soften inside of her. He pulled his cock out and lay besides the doll. His breathing was heavy and he felt his heart pounding from such a hard orgasm. He looked over at his doll and made her turn to face him. He stroked her rubber face and kissed her lips.

"Oh you little whore. Look what you did to me. Now I gotta clean you up," his voice was sincere and sweet.

Greg got up feeling his body weak. He cleaned Dolly up and went to take a shower. The warm water felt good on his naked body. He felt somewhat like a geek for having had sex only with his doll, but at least he was happy. He wanted to actually go back to the library and ask one of the brunettes out. He was ready to explore a real girl this time. He knew if things didn't got well, he'd have Dolly for backup.
 
I have no idea if you'd be interested in the proposition or not, but what you have is very close to a Lit worthy story, and I'd personally love to edit and tweak it a bit to make it more complete. I was actually going to write up a story of my own this weekend, but what you have isn't too far what I would have written myself. Again, this is up to you; perhaps it would be better to have two separate stories by each of us after all for the sake of contrast.

The devil, as they say, is in the details, and that's a big part of what I'd address. Probably the biggest thing, and what I learned very quickly from my own experience, is that these blow up dolls are almost impossible to fuck without some sort of lubricant. KY is ideal, and the ritual of applying it to the insides of the doll's vagina is analogous to finger fuckings a real cunt to make it wet and ready. I once made the mistake of using Vaseline, only to discover the hard way what oil based lubricants like that do to PVC.

These dolls also have a very distinctive smell, which is usually covered up to some degree on the higher quality dolls by a kind of perfume. It's a strangely sickly smell that can be repellant and attractive at the same time. Any clothes that I ever put on my dolls always carried that smell, so I refrained from using any valuable clothing on it (thus the Goodwill).

The placement of the vagina on these dolls is typically a bit odd. Not exactly between the legs, but up further on the pelvis facing forward. A hole of exactly the same size and general location is mirrored on her butt to mimic anal sex. Because dolls have basically little weight, this kind of placement makes it easier to fuck since the motion is more directly up and down rather than forward and back.

One of the single most exquisite experiences one can have with these dolls is the initial moment of penetration. That is a moment I would definitely linger on with a certain degree of lurid description.

Most dolls have seams, which are most obvious running up and down the front and back of the legs. The better dolls have interior seams, which are less noticeable, and don't scrape against you the way exterior seams do. Hopefully there may be blow up dolls out there without seams, but I'd never had the luck to find one during my days of experimentation with them. Seams do spoil some of the fantasy aspect of these dolls, but they are one of their most distinctive features and would be hard to ignore in any general description of them.

Any other changes to the story I would make would simply involve the fleshing out of the main character and the fantasy aspect.

Anyway, if you are interested in a collaboration, feel free to email me at akito01@yahoo.com

Cheers
 
you can expand his recalling the limited real life experiences, as he appreciates the compliacance of Dolly
 
Akito01 said:
I have no idea if you'd be interested in the proposition or not, but what you have is very close to a Lit worthy story, and I'd personally love to edit and tweak it a bit to make it more complete. I was actually going to write up a story of my own this weekend, but what you have isn't too far what I would have written myself. Again, this is up to you; perhaps it would be better to have two separate stories by each of us after all for the sake of contrast.

The devil, as they say, is in the details, and that's a big part of what I'd address. Probably the biggest thing, and what I learned very quickly from my own experience, is that these blow up dolls are almost impossible to fuck without some sort of lubricant. KY is ideal, and the ritual of applying it to the insides of the doll's vagina is analogous to finger fuckings a real cunt to make it wet and ready. I once made the mistake of using Vaseline, only to discover the hard way what oil based lubricants like that do to PVC.

These dolls also have a very distinctive smell, which is usually covered up to some degree on the higher quality dolls by a kind of perfume. It's a strangely sickly smell that can be repellant and attractive at the same time. Any clothes that I ever put on my dolls always carried that smell, so I refrained from using any valuable clothing on it (thus the Goodwill).

The placement of the vagina on these dolls is typically a bit odd. Not exactly between the legs, but up further on the pelvis facing forward. A hole of exactly the same size and general location is mirrored on her butt to mimic anal sex. Because dolls have basically little weight, this kind of placement makes it easier to fuck since the motion is more directly up and down rather than forward and back.

One of the single most exquisite experiences one can have with these dolls is the initial moment of penetration. That is a moment I would definitely linger on with a certain degree of lurid description.

Most dolls have seams, which are most obvious running up and down the front and back of the legs. The better dolls have interior seams, which are less noticeable, and don't scrape against you the way exterior seams do. Hopefully there may be blow up dolls out there without seams, but I'd never had the luck to find one during my days of experimentation with them. Seams do spoil some of the fantasy aspect of these dolls, but they are one of their most distinctive features and would be hard to ignore in any general description of them.

Any other changes to the story I would make would simply involve the fleshing out of the main character and the fantasy aspect.

Anyway, if you are interested in a collaboration, feel free to email me at akito01@yahoo.com

Cheers


Hey those details you gave me helped a lot! I'm going to try to add more to this story and I might just take u up on ur offer ;)
 
just a note to say great job on the story, jessy, since you don't do the feedback thing. Very nicely written to build the doll play into a character driven piece, not just a simple scene.
 
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=120407

In the end, I decided against doing a riff on Jessy's story idea, since it would have been fairly redundant. Instead, having already made the awkward admission that I've had real life experience with these things, I took yet another completely embarrassing bit of my past and adapted that into a story. It was written in such a short space of time, I wonder if I shouldn't have sat on it a bit longer to flesh it out, but anyway, there it is.
 
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Sirhugs..thanks for enjoying my little doll story *wink*

Akito. your story was hot! I left you a public comment *s* Thanks for writing it. I think more stories like this should be written *s*
 
Akito01 said:
. . . In the end, I decided against doing a riff on Jessy's story idea, since it would have been fairly redundant . . .

Akito01,

If you still wish to do a complimentary story, you might consider writing the story from Dolly's point of view.

It need not necessarily be redundant. It only needs to match the physical details. Dolly's opinion of the event may be completely different from Greg's.

Perhaps Dolly is tired of guys who have only one thing on their mind. Maybe she dreams of being recycled as a prophylactic. :rolleyes:
 
Quasimodem said:
Akito01,

If you still wish to do a complimentary story, you might consider writing the story from Dolly's point of view.

It need not necessarily be redundant. It only needs to match the physical details. Dolly's opinion of the event may be completely different from Greg's.

Perhaps Dolly is tired of guys who have only one thing on their mind. Maybe she dreams of being recycled as a prophylactic. :rolleyes:


I have to admit, that is something of an original tact on the subject. I wasn't sure about it at first, but having given it some thought, the idea became kind of insidious.

Going back to the original story idea, I think the basic appeal of it lies in it's depiction of a particular kind of male masturbation. It's not so much about the doll, but how the male character relates to it, how he uses it as a tool to express his sexuality. The conceit here is that the young male, brimming with pent up sexual energy and hormones, must get himself off in any way possible. It's a very primal, animalistic image; the male in rut, acting out the mating ritual with a convenient object of fantasy.

For the doll, since her single designed purpose is to facilitate the mans pleasure, I don't think she would have any real angst about her position. Rather, I think she would have anxiety about the day when she is no longer useful to him, and relagated to the trash as an embarrassing figment of this past.

To refer to Jess' story, I think the doll would have a very torturous time during the mating iteslf. Naturally, she would revel in the feeling of his prick within her, her function being fulfilled. But, the vasoline lubrication, being oil based, would be slowly eating away at her PVC skin. As I mentioned before, I learned this lesson the hard way. I had this Chinese love doll, probably my favorite of the 5 total I've owned, which had internal seams, really nice color, and a face that wasn't completely hideous. I even actually liked it a little, and I fashioned makeshift eyelids for her to make it look like her eyes were closed. But, after a short while, I discovered she had a slow leak -a pinhole opening just above her vagina. It looked like the plastic had melted, and I shortly realized it was the vasoline (thus the reason they say not to use oil based lubes with condoms). So, in the story, the doll would realize that each wonderful mating brought her one step closer to her demise, with no way of telling him what was happening. A tragic love affair between man and object.
 
Akito01 said:
It looked like the plastic had melted, and I shortly realized it was the vasoline (thus the reason they say not to use oil based lubes with condoms). So, in the story, the doll would realize that each wonderful mating brought her one step closer to her demise, with no way of telling him what was happening. A tragic love affair between man and object.

Such a sad story. I remember when I lost my first love to deflatiteass. Oh I cried and wimpered even tried the patch kit. (the usless patch kit)

Parting is such sweet sorrow. Always remember there is another just like the first waiting on the shelf. Hmm think I want a blond tonight. Hey who wants to play darts?
 
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