Guy writing from woman's POV

[bumblegrum]

Hi everyone,

A few months back I asked a question, I think in this forum, about whether a guy could write effectively from a woman's POV. I got some really helpful and interesting feedback (including from one author who was willing to allow me to rewrite one of his stories from th woman's POV. Brave guy - I discovered that that was going to be a massive issue, particularly as they are a great writer.)

So I decided to start from scratch, and the result, called "A Mother's Tail" (I've got a weakness for bad puns, too) has recently been accepted in the Incest/Taboo category.

I'd be interested in any feedback, of course, but if any of our female readers feel inclined to take a look, I'd be most interested to know if they think it is a reasonable representation of a woman's POV, or whether I've completely fouled it up. Don't worry, I've got a very thick skin, so if you think it's crap, please tell me.

Regards

 

[PennLady]

Bumblegrum, good luck. You should post a link to the story here. You may have one in your sig, but many of us don't display sigs.

 

[bumblegrum]

Hi Penn Lady. Good thought; many thanks.

The story is at http://www.literotica.com/s/a-mothers-tail

 

[lovecraft68]

Nice job especially liked the BDSM aspect and how you exposed the father as not a true dominant, but simply a 50 shades style obsessed fraud sadist.

All around an excellent job!