Group Sex idea

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I always like Group Sex stories. This is something that probably has been done already, but I just wanted to share my idea.

It has been a warm day at the end of summer. The main character (male) is running in the woods with his wife and a girlfriend (or just two girlfriends). They run the same track on a regular basis and pass a large house, hidden in the woods behind a large fence. They have always wondered who lives there.

That day one of the female characters sprains her ankle quite close to the house. The male character and the other female carry their friend / his wife to the house to see if they can get help.

When they are close to the large fence they hear sounds of people having sex. They ring at the front door and after a while a man opens the door wearing only some swimshorts, that cannot hide a large bulge.

The three runners explain their situation and the man invites them into the house and into the garden where they put the wounded girl /woman on a chair with a support for her sprained ankle.

In the garden is the woman friend of the man of the house. She also is wearing nothing but a bikini brief. Her breasts are nice and firm with nipples that are still erect from the interrupted loveplay. Half hidden under a blanket you can spot a hardcore porn magazine, that apparently invited the loveplaying.

After a while the five persons, two male and three female, engange in all manner of sexual positions, spending a lovely evening. At the end the lovemaking has been beneficiary enough to the sprained ankle for the person to leave on her own two feet.

Any comments?
 
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several elements are common, and you wil get critics complaining that it is unrealistic, but I think you have a nice 'twist' to the combination.

I wonder though if the couple jogging ought to be just a couple. Hubby/bf carries her to the sunbather's house. If you want more than a fioursome, the extra biody can be at the house. Unless you want an element of psychology of the reluctance with the chum. Several ways to play that- her shyness to do strangers in front of friend/ her shock if friend takes initiative first/ her reluctance to share her guy with or in front of friend/ her attraction to friend.... lots of potential
 
Thank you, Sir for your kind words. As for unrealistic, I have seen some pretty unrealistic stories here on Lit' ;)

The idea for the story actually came about, a few years ago, when I was jogging with two ladyfriends of mine. This was at the beach near where we life. In the summer we usually ended up at the nude beach, where we would go swimming to cool off. This in itself would inspire a nice, if very familiar, story.

I like your idea of having a person reacting shy at first but then later loosing her inhibitions. As your said, there is some potential in the idea.

I am not much of writer, more of a dreamer. Anyone who wants to pick up on the story is more than welcome.
 
despite the real life inspiration, you might find as you write it that fictionalizing it means moving away from the real events..And I do think you should try writing it.
 
sirhugs said:
...And I do think you should try writing it.
I agree. It will cut no ice saying that you've never written a story before. We all started from there, even the most prolific of us.
 
agree

agree with the boys, you've got it all mapped out in your head honey, write it, if i can write a bloody story and get it accepted here anyone can:D
 
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