Honey_B
Weaver of Dreams
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Hello, my husband (Fly_on_the_Wall), asked me to revise his 'Gridiron Gladiators' thread. Apparently the first time it was up no women was willing to join this jock-oriented saga. Not surprising since all of the female parts were scary as hell. Here's my attempt, please give it some consideration.
The plot is an expansion NFL team, the Fargo Foxes. In a climate that makes Green Bay look balmy, the players come for the team's knockout cheerleading squad. They are coached by an aging, washed-up coach, named Bobby "The General" Smith, football's answer to Bobby Knight. The General is the only person who actually cares about football.
In addition to the General, we have:
He Hate Me, a former XFL player who is just happy to be collecting an NFL paycheck.
Granthies Mitchell, a quarterback who years ago had potential, but always has been a stiff and is stiff most of the time.
Antonio Georgio Riveria, the placekicker of the team, he is of indeterminate European ancestry. Despite trailing the league in field goals, he leads the league in home runs.
The Foxies:
These are not your ordinary cheerleaders. In an attempt to draw players to frozen South Dakota, the team owners have chosen "professional" women who are willing to do anything to cheer on their team.
Belinda Sherman: A petite blonde bombshell, she had to have a custom-made uniform just to fit her DDD size breasts.
Destiny Friendly: An beautiful, light-skinned, African-American woman who reeks class even if she has the most talented tongue in the NFL
Georgia Montgomery: A sweet little thing from Iowa with red hair and freckles. She actually was a cheerleader in college and she carries off the pure and innocent routine well even though she slept her way through the 'Big Ten'
Helga: The 6'2" blonde, Nordic goddess who leads the Foxies with an iron hand. She comes to America after running a brothel in her native Norway. She is quite the dominatrix and keeps the General in line in more ways than one.
My husband will be playing the General and I, god help me, will write Helga.
Anakin had joined in the original thread as He Hate Me so he has first dibs on that part.
The Setting:
The team has just lost their fifteenth staight game, falling to 0-15. The General is becoming so incensed by the team's embarressing play that he scheduled a scrimmage with the team's cheerleading squad.
The scene opens in the coed lockerroom (can anyone say "Group Showers") shared by both the football players and the cheerleaders. It is the halftime of the scrimmage and both "teams" are reentering the locker room. The cheerleaders are up 14-0.
The plot is an expansion NFL team, the Fargo Foxes. In a climate that makes Green Bay look balmy, the players come for the team's knockout cheerleading squad. They are coached by an aging, washed-up coach, named Bobby "The General" Smith, football's answer to Bobby Knight. The General is the only person who actually cares about football.
In addition to the General, we have:
He Hate Me, a former XFL player who is just happy to be collecting an NFL paycheck.
Granthies Mitchell, a quarterback who years ago had potential, but always has been a stiff and is stiff most of the time.
Antonio Georgio Riveria, the placekicker of the team, he is of indeterminate European ancestry. Despite trailing the league in field goals, he leads the league in home runs.
The Foxies:
These are not your ordinary cheerleaders. In an attempt to draw players to frozen South Dakota, the team owners have chosen "professional" women who are willing to do anything to cheer on their team.
Belinda Sherman: A petite blonde bombshell, she had to have a custom-made uniform just to fit her DDD size breasts.
Destiny Friendly: An beautiful, light-skinned, African-American woman who reeks class even if she has the most talented tongue in the NFL
Georgia Montgomery: A sweet little thing from Iowa with red hair and freckles. She actually was a cheerleader in college and she carries off the pure and innocent routine well even though she slept her way through the 'Big Ten'
Helga: The 6'2" blonde, Nordic goddess who leads the Foxies with an iron hand. She comes to America after running a brothel in her native Norway. She is quite the dominatrix and keeps the General in line in more ways than one.
My husband will be playing the General and I, god help me, will write Helga.
Anakin had joined in the original thread as He Hate Me so he has first dibs on that part.
The Setting:
The team has just lost their fifteenth staight game, falling to 0-15. The General is becoming so incensed by the team's embarressing play that he scheduled a scrimmage with the team's cheerleading squad.
The scene opens in the coed lockerroom (can anyone say "Group Showers") shared by both the football players and the cheerleaders. It is the halftime of the scrimmage and both "teams" are reentering the locker room. The cheerleaders are up 14-0.
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