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you can view my chapters by clicking here: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=509195
thank you.
the thing that I've noticed in this early stage after posting is that each chapter has its own unique characteristics.
chapter one has the most views with posted comments.
chapter two has the least amount of views but more rating votes than chapter three.
chapter three has more views than chapter two but fewer rating votes.
I know there are very logical reasons for this but if anyone thinks they can offer something that I'm not aware of I would appreciate it very much.
I'm not thin-skinned so I can take most opinions. I especially like bad reviews since I think I can learn the most from them. Still, it seems a bit odd that those who posted comments on chapter one asking for supplemental chapters seem to be so quiet now. I know I'm probably just being a bit impatient.
I would also guess that it doesn't help that I didn't reveal upfront the complete nature of my story. Sure it's a celebrity story with an aging theme, but I didn't hint at all the openness of sexuality included. then again, what fun is there in that? why should i try to include all the things going on in my story when it seems to me that readers ought to be prepared for anything, especially in erotica.
again, any comments would be appreciated from the time you take regarding my story.
I see already that erotica is a bit of a challenge for the sexually active author. I ran into the problem of trying to write so much so fast that I included a few storyline gaffes that I intend to correct later. there also seems to be a bit of redundant phrases that I went overboard with. still, apparently i can fix that with an EDIT.
thanks again for any comments and have a happy new year!
thank you.
the thing that I've noticed in this early stage after posting is that each chapter has its own unique characteristics.
chapter one has the most views with posted comments.
chapter two has the least amount of views but more rating votes than chapter three.
chapter three has more views than chapter two but fewer rating votes.
I know there are very logical reasons for this but if anyone thinks they can offer something that I'm not aware of I would appreciate it very much.
I'm not thin-skinned so I can take most opinions. I especially like bad reviews since I think I can learn the most from them. Still, it seems a bit odd that those who posted comments on chapter one asking for supplemental chapters seem to be so quiet now. I know I'm probably just being a bit impatient.
I would also guess that it doesn't help that I didn't reveal upfront the complete nature of my story. Sure it's a celebrity story with an aging theme, but I didn't hint at all the openness of sexuality included. then again, what fun is there in that? why should i try to include all the things going on in my story when it seems to me that readers ought to be prepared for anything, especially in erotica.
again, any comments would be appreciated from the time you take regarding my story.
I see already that erotica is a bit of a challenge for the sexually active author. I ran into the problem of trying to write so much so fast that I included a few storyline gaffes that I intend to correct later. there also seems to be a bit of redundant phrases that I went overboard with. still, apparently i can fix that with an EDIT.
thanks again for any comments and have a happy new year!
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