stalwartone
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OOC - This is a story thread for appleapps and myself. This little vignette is inspired by an old song, and I hope we can do it justice. Please, feel free to send critiques and comments via PM. Thanks, Stalwartone.
IC
1964
The old house stood alone, overwatching an overrun section of field. The entire property was in need of tending, from the roof showing patches of exposed tar paper, to the peeling paint and cracked windows, to the yard that had been steadily losing a battle to the weeds and wild grasses. One shutter hung loose on an upper window, banging slightly on it's solitary remaining hinge, but other windows couldn't boast even a single shutter. The fence around the property was a wrought iron affair, scarred from multiple years of enduring the elements, and it's gate was held shut more by it's canted position than by any working latch.
The house was old, built well before the turn of the century, and had been once a mansion for the wealthy section of the town. It occupied a high point of ground, and boasted an excellent view of the land all around, including the woods to one side, the gentle drop to a river on the other, what had once been fields to the rear, and the street in front. Few vehicles came this way, although a winding path lead around behind the rear of the place, frequented by the local children on their explorations between the woods and river.
It was also dark, seeming to suck the light from the world around it. This might in part have been from the poor condition, but also from the apparent lack of electricity. No signs of light were within it, and what light fixtures were outside seemed to be in no condition to function. It was, for lack of a better term, a proverbial haunted house, lacking only a gargoyle and a vulture to complete the scene.
The silence that loomed over the area was suddenly shattered by gleeful shouts and cries. From the trail meandering along between riverway and the woods, four young boys pranced along, talking and jabbering amongst themselves, their hands in motion as they described their latest adventures to each other. No one seemed to be listening, but that didn't stop them all from talking at the same time. They were all of an age, in that stage that allowed for independence from their parents and siblings, but hadn't yet brought on the awkwardness of puberty.
One of the boys paused in his explanation of the order of a baseball game to briefly search the ground, then he stood. His arm stretched back behind him, and he briefly shaded his eyes to draw a bead on the house, then the arm whipped forward. A rock sailed smoothly from his hand, arcing wide and clearing the building easily in it's flight. He immediately stooped again, muttering under his breath about the throw, his hand seeking another missile. One of the other boys made a move to stop him.
"No, don't."
"Why not. It's just an old house."
"You can't. She lives there."
"Whaddaya mean? That thing's abandoned. It needs to be knocked down."
"No, I mean it. She'll get you." The other two boys added agreements to the last statement, their eyes nervously searching the lines of the house.
"She? Who's she?"
The second boy looked around quickly, then leaned in, and whispered two words, the name almost a benediction as he said it.
"Crazy Mary."
"Right." With a noted nonchalance, the new stone was selected, weighed, hefted, then sent flying in a much more controlled arc. A harsh crash sounded, and a pair of shingles broke free, slid down the roof, then fell to the ground with a crash.
"Now you did it." The second boy started scouting the length of the path, seeming to become a small animal sensing a predator near by.
IC
1964
The old house stood alone, overwatching an overrun section of field. The entire property was in need of tending, from the roof showing patches of exposed tar paper, to the peeling paint and cracked windows, to the yard that had been steadily losing a battle to the weeds and wild grasses. One shutter hung loose on an upper window, banging slightly on it's solitary remaining hinge, but other windows couldn't boast even a single shutter. The fence around the property was a wrought iron affair, scarred from multiple years of enduring the elements, and it's gate was held shut more by it's canted position than by any working latch.
The house was old, built well before the turn of the century, and had been once a mansion for the wealthy section of the town. It occupied a high point of ground, and boasted an excellent view of the land all around, including the woods to one side, the gentle drop to a river on the other, what had once been fields to the rear, and the street in front. Few vehicles came this way, although a winding path lead around behind the rear of the place, frequented by the local children on their explorations between the woods and river.
It was also dark, seeming to suck the light from the world around it. This might in part have been from the poor condition, but also from the apparent lack of electricity. No signs of light were within it, and what light fixtures were outside seemed to be in no condition to function. It was, for lack of a better term, a proverbial haunted house, lacking only a gargoyle and a vulture to complete the scene.
The silence that loomed over the area was suddenly shattered by gleeful shouts and cries. From the trail meandering along between riverway and the woods, four young boys pranced along, talking and jabbering amongst themselves, their hands in motion as they described their latest adventures to each other. No one seemed to be listening, but that didn't stop them all from talking at the same time. They were all of an age, in that stage that allowed for independence from their parents and siblings, but hadn't yet brought on the awkwardness of puberty.
One of the boys paused in his explanation of the order of a baseball game to briefly search the ground, then he stood. His arm stretched back behind him, and he briefly shaded his eyes to draw a bead on the house, then the arm whipped forward. A rock sailed smoothly from his hand, arcing wide and clearing the building easily in it's flight. He immediately stooped again, muttering under his breath about the throw, his hand seeking another missile. One of the other boys made a move to stop him.
"No, don't."
"Why not. It's just an old house."
"You can't. She lives there."
"Whaddaya mean? That thing's abandoned. It needs to be knocked down."
"No, I mean it. She'll get you." The other two boys added agreements to the last statement, their eyes nervously searching the lines of the house.
"She? Who's she?"
The second boy looked around quickly, then leaned in, and whispered two words, the name almost a benediction as he said it.
"Crazy Mary."
"Right." With a noted nonchalance, the new stone was selected, weighed, hefted, then sent flying in a much more controlled arc. A harsh crash sounded, and a pair of shingles broke free, slid down the roof, then fell to the ground with a crash.
"Now you did it." The second boy started scouting the length of the path, seeming to become a small animal sensing a predator near by.
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