Great story ideas, but I need help! Please...

[Matthew18]

I have some great ideas for a story....here are some of the details....

Matt is a security guard, he is working the parking lot at a concert . He hears a scream and runs over with his pistol drawn from it's holster. There are 3 huge black guys. (Let's call them Seth, Steve, and uh Marcus) Matt beats 2 of them up and the third one gets him behind and beats up up a little. 2 other secutiry guards come and help him. Telling him to get the girl out of here. He gets up and helps her up she is half naked and crying. She points to her bus, then he looks at her closely and realizes it's Avril Lavigne. They go and talk for a while, her manager brings her some more clothes. and Matt asks her out for a drink. She accepts, they go get shit faced and do the big nasty.

I am very poor at describing sex scenes, so if you have any ideas for me, please feel free to share. (I'm a real virgin btw) so I know almost nothing about sex. I just need to know some good positions, and how it feels to have an orgasm, and what the body does an etc

 

[snooper]

... I just need to know some good positions, and how it feels to have an orgasm, and what the body does an etc

You can learn a lot by reading other people's writings, but in the end you have to try it for your self.

Consider trying to explain the concept of colour to a blind person. That's easy, colours are like sounds, but input through a different sensor. This will give the blind person an idea of what colour is, based on an experience they know.

Now consider trying to explain the difference between the colour purple and the colour crap.

Masturbation can give you the sensations of orgasm, but they are totally different from those of mutual masturbation, let alone full intercourse, let alone full intercourse with someone you love, let alone full intercourse with the intention of making a baby with someone you love.

No words can describe those sensations, just as no words can describe beauty. All the words can do is revive memories or inspire the imagination.

 

[sirhugs]

just describe what you imagine the actions would be like if it was you in the scene,

 

[doormouse]

Or, write it in first person.

You can write what you'd like to do to a woman, surely.

Get a photo(s) of a naked girl, fantasize about 'how' you would touch her, the 'tentative' things you would like to do to her... where you would kiss her, explaining how your mouth got from A to B... How she would respond (ie/ whimpers, soft moans, exhaled sighs, etc.). What you would like her to do to you, and how it feels, warm, tight, wet, moist...

How she smells. Say she smells musky and you'll bluff your way through. Girls DO NOT cum in bucket loads nor do men. Don't mention that she had 32B tits or anything absurd like that. Let your reader conjure up what size her tits were with their own imagination. Besides, using a celebrity, most people know what she looks like anyway, so you won't have to use descriptions of her too often.

If all else fails, read some stories by SableDrake. She does excellent sex scenes!!!

Good luck.

Edited to add: I know you're not stupid, but we like reading this stuff. When a girl is aroused, she becomes moist, or wet as some authors describe it. Also, her nipples harden with arousal or stimulation. Details not to be ignored.