Great idea for a story

[hvacmach]

Does anyone remember Monty Python and the Holy Grail 1975

Sir Galahad the chaste (played by Michael Palin) is a character of the film, Monty Python and the Holy Grail. Lands in Castle Anthrax

Greeted by Zoot
"Oh, I am afraid our life must seem very dull and quiet compared to yours. We are but eight score young blondes and brunettes, all between sixteen and nineteen-and-a-half, cut off in this castle with no one to protect us. Oooh. It is a lonely life: bathing, dressing, undressing, knitting exciting underwear. We are just not used to handsome knights. Nay. Nay. Come. Come. You may lie here".
After this it is determined that Zoot has been a bad girl "she is a naughty person and she must pay the penalty, and here in Castle Anthrax, we have but one punishment for setting alight the grail-shaped beacon: you must tie her down on a bed and spank her"

GIRLS: A spanking! A spanking!
DINGO: You must spank her well, and after you have spanked her, you may deal with her as you like, and then, spank me.
MAZING: And spank me.
STUNNER: And me.
LOVELY: And me.
DINGO: Yes. Yes, you must give us all a good spanking!
GIRLS: A spanking! A spanking! There is going to be a spanking tonight!
DINGO: And after the spanking, the oral sex.
GIRLS: The oral sex! The oral sex!
GALAHAD: Well, I could stay a bit longer. (before now he has been trying to leave)
At this moment the door burst open and three other knights come in and "save" Galahad who keeps insisting he is fine and does not need saving.

The story I have always wondered about is if Galahad had not been "saved" and the punishment fun had proceeded?

There is a youtube of this here https://youtu.be/lUqBR6S4i5g

 

[noyesmaybe]

Does anyone remember Monty Python and the Holy Grail 1975

Sir Galahad the chaste (played by Michael Palin) is a character of the film, Monty Python and the Holy Grail. Lands in Castle Anthrax

Greeted by Zoot
"Oh, I am afraid our life must seem very dull and quiet compared to yours. We are but eight score young blondes and brunettes, all between sixteen and nineteen-and-a-half, cut off in this castle with no one to protect us. Oooh. It is a lonely life: bathing, dressing, undressing, knitting exciting underwear. We are just not used to handsome knights. Nay. Nay. Come. Come. You may lie here".
After this it is determined that Zoot has been a bad girl "she is a naughty person and she must pay the penalty, and here in Castle Anthrax, we have but one punishment for setting alight the grail-shaped beacon: you must tie her down on a bed and spank her"

GIRLS: A spanking! A spanking!
DINGO: You must spank her well, and after you have spanked her, you may deal with her as you like, and then, spank me.
MAZING: And spank me.
STUNNER: And me.
LOVELY: And me.
DINGO: Yes. Yes, you must give us all a good spanking!
GIRLS: A spanking! A spanking! There is going to be a spanking tonight!
DINGO: And after the spanking, the oral sex.
GIRLS: The oral sex! The oral sex!
GALAHAD: Well, I could stay a bit longer. (before now he has been trying to leave)
At this moment the door burst open and three other knights come in and "save" Galahad who keeps insisting he is fine and does not need saving.

The story I have always wondered about is if Galahad had not been "saved" and the punishment fun had proceeded?

There is a youtube of this here https://youtu.be/lUqBR6S4i5g

You've already started... Finish the story!

 

[AlinaX]

And what if King Arthur, after cutting the limbs off the black knight, had fished his royal cock out and fed it to his helpless foe, who knows the only way to stop Arthur crossing the bridge is to keep him on the edge of orgasm for as long as humanly possible...

 

[hvacmach]

You've already started... Finish the story!

I only wish i could write anywhere near that good, That was a copy paste from the script with a tiny bit of editing to make it shorter

 

[noyesmaybe]

I only wish i could write anywhere near that good, That was a copy paste from the script with a tiny bit of editing to make it shorter

That was a beautiful sentence you wrote above, stretch that out and you have a paragraph, stretch that out further and you have a short story. Write in a narrative style that works for you, first person voice or voice of God third person etc.

I hear from some of my lower performing students, at the beginning of the year saying, that's the best I can do. Then by the end of the year, they've surpassed where they were in the begining. Crawl walk run fly.

 

[gunhilltrain]

I only wish i could write anywhere near that good, That was a copy paste from the script with a tiny bit of editing to make it shorter

You only joined five days ago. So you're here only to read other people? The Python guys have done a lot of the work for you. They have given you the premise, a setting, characters, the beginnings of a plot - so you may have to put it into the Celebrities and Fan Fiction category.

Hard to believe that the movie is forty-six years old. Carol Cleveland is now 79! She has a website.

https://www.carolcleveland.com/index.htm

 

[hvacmach]

Thanks to both of you, Noyesmaybe for being so encouraging! and gunhilltrain for the web link where I have bee having a lot of fun!