Grandpa, wake up!

[sirhugs]

Mom and Dad are increasingly annoyed that Grandpa doesn't get up for meals. Sally is even more annoyed that her parents send her up to try to wake him up, and nothing seems to work- if she shouts, the parents (and her siblings?) complain. If she shakes him, he gets grumpy...

 

[sirhugs]

Why doesn't she whisper something naughty in his ear.

followed by her tongue in his ear?

 

[Carnevil9]

Maybe she should jingle his dinner bells?

 

[sirhugs]

Maybe she should jingle his dinner bells?

lol, well put. That's the sort of thing I had in mind.

When he responds by squeezing her tit, she thinks he must be dreaming that it's her deceased grandmother doing it...

 

[UsuallyPresent]

If so, then add a scene before the most interesting wakeup where he tells her, "You sound just like your grandma" or something like that

 

[Carnevil9]

If so, then add a scene before the most interesting wakeup where he tells her, "You sound just like your grandma" or something like that

How about "You taste just like your grandma"?

 

[sirhugs]

Here is another idea I have The Granddaughter says.
" Grandpa if you wake up right now I will do that special thing. That grandma used to do for you when you woke up in the morning."

Now the grandpa is a really handsome think Tom Selleck handsome. And has a really athletic body lots and lots of muscles.

Btw the special thing is a blowjob.

I'd think it starts with a handjob...

 

[sirhugs]

I'd think it starts with a handjob...

... but is the blow job the next morning grandpa's idea, or did Sally spy n Mommy waking up Dad, and decide to try Mom's technique on Gramps?

 

[Reshbod]

... but is the blow job the next morning grandpa's idea, or did Sally spy n Mommy waking up Dad, and decide to try Mom's technique on Gramps?

After a few times, the hand job is no longer adequate, so she needs to ramp it up.

 

[sirhugs]

After a few times, the hand job is no longer adequate, so she needs to ramp it up.

but who initiates the blow job?
Is she a newbie at this?
Where does she get the inspiration?

 

[Carnevil9]

I'd think it starts with a handjob...

"Am I doing this handjob right, Grandpa?"

"Yes, but not as good as your Grandma used to do it."

"Why, what did she have that I don't have?"

"Parkinson's."

 

[sirhugs]

"Am I doing this handjob right, Grandpa?"

"Yes, but not as good as your Grandma used to do it."

"Why, what did she have that I don't have?"

"Parkinson's."

lol. If I write it, not sure I'll go there. But maybe...

here's the next question- does the wake up proceed beyond blowjobs to fucking? If so, do parents notice? Do they get involved if there is a sequel?

Not sure I'll write this, but might...

 

[Carnevil9]

Okay, how about this?


"Am I doing this blowjob right, Grandpa?"

"Yes, but not as good as your Grandma used to do it."

"Why, what did she have that I don't have?"

"Dentures."

 

[sirhugs]

Okay, how about this?


"Am I doing this blowjob right, Grandpa?"

"Yes, but not as good as your Grandma used to do it."

"Why, what did she have that I don't have?"

"Dentures."

the merits of toothless bjs is its own topic...

 

[sirhugs]

working on this story. Not sure how far the plot will go, we will see.

 

[sirhugs]

Making good progress, but each scene has grown like Grandpa's cock.

Still trying to decide whether to stop after the blow job on day two or continue to intercourse on day three and so on. Would make a very long story.

The other possibility is chapters, but based on previous experience, I sometimes run out of gas after making that commitment.

 

[Bad_Egg]

Try to wake me, will yeah!

Mom and Dad are increasingly annoyed that Grandpa doesn't get up for meals. Sally is even more annoyed that her parents send her up to try to wake him up, and nothing seems to work- if she shouts, the parents (and her siblings?) complain. If she shakes him, he gets grumpy...

https://media.giphy.com/media/dAknWZ0gEXL4A/giphy.gif

 

[Carnevil9]

Making good progress, but each scene has grown like Grandpa's cock.

Still trying to decide whether to stop after the blow job on day two or continue to intercourse on day three and so on. Would make a very long story.

The other possibility is chapters, but based on previous experience, I sometimes run out of gas after making that commitment.

Classical storytelling (or joke telling) requires a three-part structure. Otherwise it just sort of feels incomplete.

I tend to not read stories that are longer than two pages (unless I already know that the author is worth it), but still, a story should be as long as it needs to be to tell the tale properly.

If you are worried you might not finish the final chapters, then don't submit any until they are all finished. Then submit them each a few days apart.

 

[sirhugs]

First draft complete. over 6700 words, so will be two but not three Lit pages, three sex scenes as suggested. Open ended for potential sequel if I get good response and find time, as real life is interfering more these days.

Will let you know once it is up.

 

[sirhugs]

submitted today.

 

[Carnevil9]

submitted today.

Can't wait!

 

[sirhugs]

Grandpa is awake!

 

[Carnevil9]

Great story! Five stars all the way. The three-part structure worked perfectly.

And I loved the surprise ending.

 

[sirhugs]

Great story! Five stars all the way. The three-part structure worked perfectly.

And I loved the surprise ending.

That's to leave the possibility of the sequel - flashback to Mom doing her Dad, then Mom and Sally both doing grandpa. Will be tricky to make it different from Bad Grandpa.

Then Dad can get involved...or the school characters mentioned in this episode... and the other Grandpa...I could be good for life on this one.

 

[Yerkiddin]

Grandpa might have a favorite granddaughter, in that she just doesn't seem to look like his son, her mother's husband... (Still somewhat taboo, though) Especially if he told his know-it-all son that woman wasn't the one to marry.