Grammatical (de)Evolution, and Non-Erotic Pursuits

[Diamondbarrow]

Question: Has my grammar been getting worse as my stories progress?

Sub-question a: Which of my stories has the best grammar?

Sub-question b: Do you think my erotic stories are better than my non-erotic stories, or vice versa?

Work can be found here.

Anyone care to answer?

Optional: Critiques of the poems would be accepted as well, but my main focus is on the stories.

 

[neonlyte]

Question: Has my grammar been getting worse as my stories progress?

Sub-question a: Which of my stories has the best grammar?

Sub-question b: Do you think my erotic stories are better than my non-erotic stories, or vice versa?

Work can be found here.

Anyone care to answer?

Optional: Critiques of the poems would be accepted as well, but my main focus is on the stories.

Hi,
A direct appeal sometimes works. I've had a very quick scan and I'll give them a proper read and send you my opinion. But that won't be today. Can't comment to the poems, not my forte.

If you want in-depth 'peer review', check out the SDC forum, you can post there, following simple rules like agreeing to 'crit' other authors works, a host of your fellows will offer advice and comment.

neonlyte.

 

[Diamondbarrow]

Sounds good, thanks