Grammar and punctuation check

[geronimo_appleby]

My usual (a Lit friend) grammar and punctuation checker is a little busy and I have 2 pieces that could do with a check over if anyone can help out.

Both are fairly short - 1 at 2900 words and the other at 3500.

 

[LadyCibelle]

My usual (a Lit friend) grammar and punctuation checker is a little busy and I have 2 pieces that could do with a check over if anyone can help out.

Both are fairly short - 1 at 2900 words and the other at 3500.

Hey Gero,

If you can give me 2 days, for each, I'd be willing to give you a hand.
If you're interested send me your story to LadyCibelle and put on the subject line your name. I'll know to start on it quickly.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Hey Gero,

If you can give me 2 days, for each, I'd be willing to give you a hand.
If you're interested send me your story to LadyCibelle and put on the subject line your name. I'll know to start on it quickly.

thanks very much

 

[LadyCibelle]

thanks very much

Most, most welcome handsome.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Most, most welcome handsome.

handsome? *blush*