Grace...

[sufisaint]

It was a whisper in a dream
an unfimiliar voice
telling me the secrets
of my very owm soul
she knew it all....
every selfish act
every mean word
every insucurity
everything.....
ever said
ever thought
ever acted on.
And even though the good was mixed with the bad
I still felt deeply ashamed...
that she new all those weak moments...
I feel to my knees
tears were in my eyes
I could not speak...
I could not think
I could not make my body move
as the whisper became light...than form...than human..
her hand on my shoulder
she knelt down in front of me
her eyes shown like heaven
She gently kissed my lips
kissed my tears
I colapsed to the floor...
hearing her last words
I love you..you...all of you...
and finally felt, for the first time...
Grace...

 

[Ancient117331]

sufisaint,

I liked this... a minor question though... did you mean -

as the whisper became light...than form...than human..
her hand on my shoulder

or

as the whisper became light...then form...then human..
her hand on my shoulder

...well, this held my interest regardless. Thanks for posting it.

Chris Twyford
Ancient117331

 

[sufisaint]

then......

I have horrible typing skills and a little dyslexia so I cannot see my own mistakes, I have memorized how to spell words but when I rush its hard...

 

[Ancient117331]

sufisaint,

We all take typing 'hits' from time-to-time. Good poem regardless.

Chris Twyford
Ancient117331

 

[Sex & Diamonds]

sufisaint

I must admit I'm not a huge reader of poetry, but I thought yours was very good. <shrugs>...but what the heck do I know?

No comments from the peanut gallery are necessary...thankyou....

Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more from you.