Randy_Oldman
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I just posted my first story ever and I've got the new author jitters, wondering if my babe will bring some flashes of pleasure to the reader.
http://www.literotica.com/s/coaching-the-pastor
It is the story of a male pastor who meets an athletic female visitor to his church who wants to coach him as a triathlete and more. It could be the first part in a longer story.
I'd appreciate feedback as to whether the characters are believable, the dialog works and the plot makes sense.
THANKS, RO
http://www.literotica.com/s/coaching-the-pastor
It is the story of a male pastor who meets an athletic female visitor to his church who wants to coach him as a triathlete and more. It could be the first part in a longer story.
I'd appreciate feedback as to whether the characters are believable, the dialog works and the plot makes sense.
THANKS, RO
