Got another incest idea

[lexium]

Family is broken by divorce.

Two childern 18 and twins (boy/girl).

Parents have history of hot sex together.

Mother masturbates like crazy since the divorce and so does the father.

Sibling plot to get parents back together.

Daughter fucks father, son fucks mother, and siblings fuck each other.

Any concerns, or developement ideas?

 

[jubilee]

And they lived happily ever after.

Sorry, but to me this a little to straight. I like the forbidden and wicked thing about incest and with your idea it sounds like it's the everyday method to bring parents back together. Beside this I can't really see how daughter fucks faterh and son fucks mother should bring parents back together. Maybe it would make a great story but the storyline has to be written well ans espacially logical.

 

[Guest]

The Parent Trap with an odd twist? I have nothing against incest tales what so ever, but I am having trouble seeing the realism to this story. I guess I would prefer more realistic couplings (even for the "far out" topics like aliens ). Twins? Cool. Divorced parents? Sure. Hell, you could have a two part story by having the kids at mom's house and the visitation to dad's house. But, the whole Parent Trap "let's get mom and dad back together with sex" thing...? I don't know. I just don't see it.

 

[lexium]

This is the reason I'm looking for more input.

Say put the twins with their mother and they do the sex thing. Maybe the boy twin reminds the mother of her ex., and then do the same at the fathers house.

What would be your sugguestion for getting the couple back together?

 

[julian 1]

Hi Lex,
For me, the most difficult part of an incest tale is the
believability factor for the initial union. The siblings is
the easiest to imagine while the parent/child the most
difficult. Your premise componds the degree of difficulty
by involving not two but four participants.
That said, begin with the siblings getting it on and then
be discovered by one of the parents. Once these three
have it going then they can "discuss" how to involve the
other parent. Perhaps the reason for the seperation was
the affair by the currently uninvolved parent. This scenario
would provide that parent with the extra partner and thus
"reunite" the family.
Just an idea, hope it helps.

 

[Couture]

Don't listen to the 'Board Basher' Lexi. If you wait for Twigs to like a story idea, I believe you will be waiting a mighty long time.

I think your suggestion is a great idea.

What about letting them sneak into bed and make the husband think it was the wife and the wife think that it was the husband?

 

[Guest]

Don't listen to the 'Board Basher' Lexi. If you wait for Twigs to like a story idea, I believe you will be waiting a mighty long time.

Un huh. Nice to see you still care about what I think. If you didn't, you wouldn't have posted what you said.

What about letting them sneak into bed and make the husband think it was the wife and the wife think that it was the husband?

Did ya forget that Lex described the parents as divorced and not a couple?



P.S.
Lex already knows how I feel about her work. I guess you don't read the Story Feedback board?

 

[lexium]

Sometimes this board is so interesting and full of ideas that I forget that there's some real action going on in my own home

I love you Tiggi

This is a difficult theme, but I want to work it out.

What could be the reason for divorce? I stated that the parents had a good sex life.

Horny mom, missing the constant sex with her now ex. Horny son makes it worse for her, displaying his hard-on (hardon !???) under spandex...you know the drill.

Frequent sex usually happens in a marriage because the woman wants it...most men will do it when they can.

She's got to have it and her son acts just like the man who had been satisfying her for years and appears to have an even bigger cock!

What do you think about the mother part?

 

[julian 1]

Pls folks, this is an idea thread. Don't try to score points
unrelated to the thread.
Tiggs is critical but analitical and cogent. Lex, if folks respond
to your requests for comments, give them a response on their
views.

 

[lexium]

Pls folks, this is an idea thread. Don't try to score points
unrelated to the thread.
Tiggs is critical but analitical and cogent. Lex, if folks respond
to your requests for comments, give them a response on their
views.

OK Julian, if you think that I have ignored your comments, you are wrong. I did take them into account. I do appreciate your comments and I found them helpful, but I don't give a SHIT about you thinking that I maybe trying to score points or not.

If you don't like the way I incorporated your comments into asking more questions to help me create a story using the elements I started this thread with, I don't give a FUCK about that either.

It is your choice to respond in a manner inwhich you see fit. You can also choose not to respond to this thread.

I started this thread in hopes of getting ideas that could help me make the story real.

I'm pissed because you are forcing me to show my lily-white ass on the board.

And so that you know...I love you too hun

And again, I do appreciate your comments and input. They were helpful.

This really should have been a PM, but...

 

[lexium]

Still working on the mother

I'm still working on the mother and the divorce, and then I can start working on the ex-husband.

I'm trying to figure out what could have caused the divorce, and that would not be so damaging that it would allow them to get back together.

I've tried to establish that the sexual relationship between the wife and husband was over active, so cheating has no real basis.

I'm asking for ideas to help me make this story as believable as I can. Please!

 

[julian 1]

Hey Lex,
I was referring to Coulture beating on Tiggs not you. I do
stand on my statement that if a writer is asking for feedback
or input and someone offers a post, a simple thanks is
in order.

 

[lexium]

Hey Lex,
I was referring to Coulture beating on Tiggs not you. I do
stand on my statement that if a writer is asking for feedback
or input and someone offers a post, a simple thanks is
in order.

Yes, I'm sorry hun....

I would like to thank everyone for there comments, if I have not done so already.

Writting a story that's believable is not easy for me, especially since my situation is not main stream.

Julian I appologize...forgive me

My notes on this story idea reflect that I still have a hole when it comes to the divorce and reconciliation based on sexual desires.

Do anyone have any ideas how to handle this?

 

[Rex1960]

Do anyone have any ideas how to handle this?

hi lexium

may i throw this in:

mother and father divorced caused by different business (maybe one at East Coast the other West Coast, couldn't handle the LDR.

daughter living at dads place - son living at moms.

Twins finding their parents masturbating and finally getting into sex with them. Two different chapters of the same story. But the one twin doesn't know of the others sexlife and viceversa.

Another independend chapter might be how the twins are trying to get mom and dad back together after they knew about the "great sex" mom and dad have had before....

Maybe the happy ending is a "menage à quatre".

Just what came into my mind spontaneously.

Rex

 

[julian 1]

Apology accepted.

Moving right along...

The father is caught in an adultrous relationship which is the
cause for the divorce. The father's defense, at the time, is
his inability to be monogamous.

The mother walks in on the brother and sister and it turns
her on. She walks away and later has a heart-to-heart talk
with the kids about what happened. She doesn't condem
their mutual attraction because she doesn't deny her own
arousal by the scene. The mother is beginning to understand
the complexity of human sexuality. A threesome develops.

The daughter realizes that she could bring dad back home by
acting upon the latent desires they have for each other. The
daughter engineers a scene with dad and they are "caught"
by mom and bro. This new family relationship solves the
original problem for the divorce...the father's affair, his inability
to remain monogamous.

 

[lexium]

Thanks for accepting my appology Julian.

Let's explore more of Rex's idea. It's been along time since I've seen "The Parent Trap".

I think that the long distant relationship will work hear. Thanks Rex.

This way the issue between the parents aren't such that can't be over come. No deeply hurt feelings.

The father and mother current job/career paths are more flexible.

Current sexual habbits could bring back memories of a reunion.

The divorce could be four years old, so that the parents still have fresh memories of each other, but each could blame the other for breaking them apart.

 

[buzz78]

Yikes, the politics of this thread are getting a little rough. The whole idea of people getting angry and jealous and competitive with each other in here is ridiculous. But enough of my grandstanding. Lexium, I love your work! Some of your imagery of a son looking over at his mother, bent over while her skirt works its way up over her rear and hips, exposing herself to him, is unforgettable and has stuck with me. In terms of the story at hand, all I can think of is that the basis of the story should be one of mistaken identity (or false pretenses). i.e. Due to the lack of communication between the mother and father they thought that they would be incompatibly, sexually (each one thinking that the other one is too inhibited for the other). Once they realize that they are both "crazy sexual freaks" (like the father tries and succeeds in seducing the daughter and the mothe does likewise with her son), the newly divorced couple realizes that they are truly meant for each other, and the kids want them too. Just a suggestion but you could end it in a nice family orgy.

 

[MsLinnet]

Family is broken by divorce.

Two childern 18 and twins (boy/girl).

Parents have history of hot sex together.

Mother masturbates like crazy since the divorce and so does the father.

Sibling plot to get parents back together.

Daughter fucks father, son fucks mother, and siblings fuck each other.

Any concerns, or developement ideas?

hi ya i have done a story along this line in colaboration with a friend of mine it was based around a horse farm but incest and abuse ran through the hole story never did finish it must get back there some time