Good Intensions (1 female- modern fantasy)

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Good Intentions (closed)

The last thing that Robert Woods had expected to find trapped in the headlights of his RV camper was a nude girl. There she was though, right in the middle of the off-ramp. Her pale, slender body was covered in bruises and wounds, like she had crawled onto the road through heavy underbrush. Her long, blond hair was twisted up with branches and prickers. The girl could not be a day over eighteen, which immediately made Robert fell protective of her.

She was staring right at him, as he slowed the RV. She looked scared as a rabbit, but stood her ground. In her hand was a long, wicked looking dagger, which was covered in fresh blood.

Robert had turned fifty years old two weeks ago, and received the present of finding his wife fucking his little brother, on his pool table, during his party. He and Marta had been married for twenty two years, together for thirty two, and had two grown children. They had spent their evenings in matching chairs, watching the news and then Letterman. They had gone to St. Mary's every Saturday night, and receive the sacraments, side by side. He had thought that they were each others life, but apparently it was not enough. She had needed that little shit Steve's dick in her, to be happy. he hoped that she was, but it was no longer his business.

Robert had left without a backward glance. He had shoved his essential tools in the back of their camper. She had always hated it anyway, calling it an immature indulgence. For three days he had driven west, without calling her. She had left eight messages on his cell phone, which he had deleted without listening to a one.

Before he left town, he had taken five thousand dollars out of their account, leaving her with a small fortune. She was welcome to it. He did not need their fancy McMansion, because he had a camper. He had needed her, but apparently she had not needed him.

Despite heading into his fifth decade on Earth, he was still a muscular man, with only a slight expansion around his waist. His upper body had some navy tattoos, but nothing distasteful, except the bare-breasted mermaid on his left biceps. Though his hair was going grey, it was still thick as a bear coat. He had equally thick sideburns, which his wife had always hated. There were some fine lines around his eyes, but he had a cleft chin and only a hint of extra flesh on his neck.

Robert knew that he was not a flashy dresser, but his ubiquitous boots, jeans and flannel shirts had always made him look strong, or so Marta, the bitch, had told him, back when she gave a shit about him. His brother was a runt, and a prick, but Robert was jealous of his rakish good looks. He never thought that Marta would fall for that fop.

Marta was behind him now, and that life was over. This girl was literally in front of him, and obviously in terrible trouble. For a moment he hesitated, fearing a trap. Still, it did not matter. He had already lost all that mattered to him, so what was his life. He opened the driver's door and stepped down slowly. Holding up his empty hands, he approached the girl.

OCC: Despite the setup, this is not a quick screw game. I need someone to write for the young woman. She is on the run from an abusive master who kept her, and her sisters captive. He is an evil magician who has a respectable front as a mayor of a small Missouri town. His minions steal young women, for him to use in his dastardly and demonic rituals. The girl has stolen a powerful ritual dagger, and he will be after her.

PM me if you are interested. I need someone who will writ posts of at least three paragraphs, post at least tri-weekly and who will not stop posting after one week.

To anyone who may wonder, I did not post this in the SRP forum, because everything there leads to sex within the first five posts. I want to tell stories, not write porn. Sure, I enjoy a bit of sex when I read a novel, but I am one of the ones that stopped reading the Anita Blake series after she turned into a mega slut. The story got lost in the sex. It is like taking the Italian beef out of your bun, scrapping off the cheese and onions, and then just eating it. Sure, it taste's good, but it is messy, and sticks to your fingers, and generally does not lead to.... Never mind. I lost the analogy.
 
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Seems interesting...though i do have to disagree not all posts start sex on the first five...just ones that rush into it and aren't really looking for some kind of story.
 
I'm interested though, I'm just trying to decide if i have time for yet another thread.
 
"GET BACK HERE YOU BITCH!!!" her master yelled. Allison had managed to finally escape from his grasp. It had taken long months before she had actually succeeded. She didn't think that she would get away from Master Alan. Sadly, she had to leave her sisters there. It wasn't something she had wanted to do, no. It was something that had to be done. Master Alan had cast a spell on her sisters, literally. They were utterly fascinated by him. Her eldest sister Elaine even found herself saying she was in love with the beast!

So, Allison had no choice, she had to leave with or without them. She had managed to escape by gaining master Alans trust. He was beginning to trust her so much that he left her unhandcuffed and the door to her cell open. Thats when she bolted out of the attic and out the front door. She hated leaving her sisters in his cruel grasp but she didn't think she could handle his cruel touch.

She remembered his last words to her.

Should you leave me, my precious little jewel. I will not come after you but make your sisters pay for your sins, you slut! Then he slapped her on the cheek. So it seemed as though her sisters would have to pay for her transgressions.

"Forgive me, sisters..." she whispered as she fell to the ground by the side of the road. It seemed like an eternity until someone had pulled up in front of her, the door opened and it was as though she was looking into the eyes of an angel as he approached her. She bit her lip and took his hand nervously.

"Thank you..." she whispered, lowering her eyes habitually.
 
Robert approached the girl carefully, wary of the knife in her hand. She was on all four, and clutching the knife in a death grip. She looked up at him with a bruised face and bite her lip, before reaching out for him. His heart tore at the site. Here was a girl who was so young that his daughter and son were both older than her by a good ten years. She had obviously been horribly used by someone, and had escaped her tormentor, or just left here.

He took her hand, and if was soft, and shaking. He could not imagine the courage that it had taken her to trust him this much, and he certainly could not leave her out here alone and in this condition. What if her abuser was still around, or tracking her? He glanced around nervously.

"I am going to help you, but your going to have to trust me. I am going to pick you up now, and get you to someplace safe, OK?" He did not wait for her reply, though he prayed she would not protest. He did not wish to argue with a victim on a highway. He might get arrested himself, if a cop drove past and saw they struggling.

He gently took the knife from her, and stuck it through his belt, and then got down on his haunches, and pulled the girl to him, until he was holding her like a bride being carried over the threshold. He ignored the feel of his hand on her soft skin, and did not feel any stimulation from her naked form. She was a lovely girl, but so were his daughters. He immediately categorized her in the class of a young woman without her father around to protect her, and so the need for someone to fill his role, for the moment.

He managed to stand, despite the protest of his knees, and carried her back to the RV. He managed to get her through the door, and stopped for a moment, before heading for the back. "I'm going to lay you on the bed for now girl. I will be in the front driving. I am not sure what sort of trouble you're in, but we need to get some miles under us.
 
Allison was greatful that someone safe had come to rescue her and not that evil sorcerers minions or even her sisters. She just nodded in response and stared out the window.She was safe for the time being that was a relief. Glancing over at the man, he was much older then her former master, old enough to be her father.

As the quietness surrounded her she reflected on her time. She had always been beautiful with her long brown hair, brown eyes, plump breasts, and curvy body. It was a wonder that she had never found the 'right guy'. Her former master had kidnapped her and her sisters and had been smittened to Allison but Allison didn't find him the least bit appealing.

So, it had led to her running away.

It was a relief that the man hadn't asked her what had happened because she didn't think she could tell the story yet, without crying or sobbing. She gave a mournful sigh before drifting to sleep.
 
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