Good deeds are rewarded - helping a hot mature woman

[kwarren]

The MC (younger man) is out shopping in the local mall when he spots a women in her forties struggle carrying her bags. He offers to help her and she agrees and explains that she couldn't call her husband to help her with them because she forgot her phone in her car. The MC carrys the bags to her car in the garage and store them in the trunk. However when the MC wants to leave he is stopped by the women guided behind the car and starts to get a blowjob. But it doesn't stop with just a blowjob because after a while they end up in the backseat fucking.

During their fun the husband calls the women which rings over the hands-free phone system of her car. The women picks up all the while fucking the MC. The husband asks why she didn't pick up and the MC gets scared if the husband finds out about him fucking his wife. But the women is very relaxed. She explains to the husband that she had forgotten her phone and how the MC helped her carry her bags. Then the husband asks where she is. Now the MC is completly fearfull because he thinks the husband sees them cheating.

But once again the woman is relaxed and to the suprise of the MC even tells him that she is currently fucking the MC as a way to say thank you and that she will be home a bit later. After that the husbands seems to be quiet happy and hangs up. When the woman turns to look at the MC and sees his suprised face she explains that her husband is a cuck. After that they continue fucking.

 

[sirhugs]

The MC (younger man) is out shopping in the local mall when he spots a women in her forties struggle carrying her bags. He offers to help her and she agrees and explains that she couldn't call her husband to help her with them because she forgot her phone in her car. The MC carrys the bags to her car in the garage and store them in the trunk. However when the MC wants to leave he is stopped by the women dragged behind the car and starts to get a blowjob. But it doesn't stop with just a blowjob because after a while they end up in the backseat fucking. During their fun the husband calls the women which rings over the hands-free phone system of her car. the women picks up all the while fucking the MC. The husband asks why she didn't pick up and the MC gets scared if the husband finds out about him fucking his wife. But the women is very relaxed. She explains to the husband that she had forgotten her phone and how the MC helped her carry her bags. then the husband asks where she is. Now the MC is completly fearfull because he thinks the husband sees them cheating. But once again the woman is relaxed and to the suprise of the MC even tells him that she is currently fucking the MC as a way to say thank you and that she will be home a bit later. After that the husbands seems to be quiet happy and hangs up. When the woman turns to look at the MC and sees his suprised face she explains that her husband is a cuck. After that they continue fucking.

Does she bring MC home to "help around the house"?

 

[kwarren]

Does she bring MC home to "help around the house"?

Maybe. she might need someone to carry those bags from the car into the house because her husband isn't home and things could develop from there

 

[DarkSollat]

A big fan of the idea, but up to cucking. I don't like cucking theme.

 

[gunhilltrain]

The MC (younger man) is out shopping in the local mall when he spots a women in her forties struggle carrying her bags. He offers to help her and she agrees and explains that she couldn't call her husband to help her with them because she forgot her phone in her car. The MC carrys the bags to her car in the garage and store them in the trunk. However when the MC wants to leave he is stopped by the women dragged behind the car and starts to get a blowjob. But it doesn't stop with just a blowjob because after a while they end up in the backseat fucking. During their fun the husband calls the women which rings over the hands-free phone system of her car. the women picks up all the while fucking the MC. The husband asks why she didn't pick up and the MC gets scared if the husband finds out about him fucking his wife. But the women is very relaxed. She explains to the husband that she had forgotten her phone and how the MC helped her carry her bags. then the husband asks where she is. Now the MC is completly fearfull because he thinks the husband sees them cheating. But once again the woman is relaxed and to the suprise of the MC even tells him that she is currently fucking the MC as a way to say thank you and that she will be home a bit later. After that the husbands seems to be quiet happy and hangs up. When the woman turns to look at the MC and sees his suprised face she explains that her husband is a cuck. After that they continue fucking.

Since you already have the story outlined, why don't you write it yourself? I see from your posting list that you had several other ideas since January.

You should watch for commas and other markers of syntax. Like "the woman dragged behind the car;" it took me a moment to realize that it's the MC being dragged, and not by the car itself. The verb "drag" is probably not the best one anyway; more likely she "guided" or "suggested" to him.

You've got some spelling errors marked in red. Since the program is showing where they are, just fix them. You can edit the message after it's been posted. Also, you might break the whole message into two or three paragraphs for readability.

It would be nice to know how far away the husband is. I guess he's at work? Is it a fifteen minutes or an hour for him to get to this mall? You need a couple of additional plot points like: the motivations of the woman, has she done something like this before, and so forth. Is this from the point of view of the young guy (what is his age?) or the woman?

 

[kwarren]

Since you already have the story outlined, why don't you write it yourself? I see from your posting list that you had several other ideas since January.

You should watch for commas and other markers of syntax. Like "the woman dragged behind the car;" it took me a moment to realize that it's the MC being dragged, and not by the car itself. The verb "drag" is probably not the best one anyway; more likely she "guided" or "suggested" to him.

You've got some spelling errors marked in red. Since the program is showing where they are, just fix them. You can edit the message after it's been posted. Also, you might break the whole message into two or three paragraphs for readability.

It would be nice to know how far away the husband is. I guess he's at work? Is it a fifteen minutes or an hour for him to get to this mall? You need a couple of additional plot points like: the motivations of the woman, has she done something like this before, and so forth. Is this from the point of view of the young guy (what is his age?) or the woman?

Thanks for the feedback!

 

[gunhilltrain]

Thanks for the feedback!

You're welcome. Sex in cars can be a fun topic, partially because of the problem of finding some privacy. Young guy-older women stories are good too. I combined the two themes in a series of stories about a part-time limo driver who gets involved with three of his female customers, two of whom have kinky-BDSM tastes. (All three were friends before hand.) The driver narrates, and he finds out more about them with each incident.

https://classic.literotica.com/s/queen-of-diamonds-1

I put in some detail about the "aftermath," when he's driving her back and she reverts from the "role" she was playing to her real self.

 

[Rob_Royale]

A big fan of the idea, but up to cucking. I don't like cucking theme.

Agreed. There's a difference between cuckold and a man who enjoys sharing his wife. What I'd do here is that he rings her on a video chat so that he can watch and cheer the MC on.

 

[DarkSollat]

Agreed. There's a difference between cuckold and a man who enjoys sharing his wife. What I'd do here is that he rings her on a video chat so that he can watch and cheer the MC on.

Disagree. I'd prefer for her to be single.

 

[Rob_Royale]

Disagree. I'd prefer for her to be single.

Well yeah in RL surely. But I'm just working with what the OP gave us.

 

[davion2308]

There are some options here. I was trying to slog through a Winter theme story where a college kid is home for Christmas break, he's shoveling driveways just to help, and the attract, much-older neighbor woman (who happens to be divorced) invites him in for some hot apple cider and some spice.

The original idea seems pretty good but take it out of the parking lot or store, put the woman in her house and comfortable, and maybe that'll add more threat of an angry husband showing up at any time in the middle of the MC playing with her.