GLBT/First Time Theme... Can I get a witness?

[CJontherocks]

My very first submission is ready. Will a kind and gentle soul please volunteer to help me perfect it?

The premise is two guys, old friends who went to high school together, try something they never thought they would. I'd like to think there's more to it than that, but... basically it boils down to a couple of guys who like to believe they're straight, and then get it on like old pros.

Let me know.

-- P

 

[Hex Witch]

Everyone has thier first story! It's exciting isn't it? I'd be happy to take a look at it for you. I write myself and love to help other people with thier works.

 

[CJontherocks]

Thanks so much. I lost track, I guess... this is an untimely response. I did find someone to take a look at the story and it's since been posted. You are more than welcome to read it and tell me what you think. Any ideas on how I can make the next one better?

 

[greywolf393]

Excellent first story, just the right amount of detail.

 

[CJontherocks]

Thanks! I've always wanted to write, but taking on a novel was too daunting. Short stories might be something I can work on for a while.

I appreciate the kind words.