Glad to know he can still take one for the team...

[Bellatrixie]

I am in the middle of writing a rather cerebral BDSM story and part one culminates in a blow job scene. I tend towards over description (hell it's a failing irl too) but I felt like the flow of the final scene wasn't striking the right note so I asked dh if he would mind if I gathered some (ahem) empirical data even though we are currently visiting his parents for thanksgiving DH being the selfless paragon as always reluctantly agreed Amazing how much easier that last scene was to write with all of the details fresh in my mind!

 

[TE999]

I am in the middle of writing a rather cerebral BDSM story and part one culminates in a blow job scene. I tend towards over description (hell it's a failing irl too) but I felt like the flow of the final scene wasn't striking the right note so I asked dh if he would mind if I gathered some (ahem) empirical data even though we are currently visiting his parents for thanksgiving DH being the selfless paragon as always reluctantly agreed Amazing how much easier that last scene was to write with all of the details fresh in my mind!

There's no substitute for in-depth research on a story.

 

[Bellatrixie]

You speak the truth.