girls revenge on mum

[danston]

How about a story where a woman gives up a girl for adoption as she is too young to raise her..

Then that woman goes onto have a big family with a different man, they have 3 sons together..

Years later, the girl who was given up for adoption finds out and wants revenge for having to spend her life in foster homes, she uses her charms on one of the sons and easily manages to become his girlfriend, then when he takes her to meet the family she seduces all of the other males in the family one by one to try and destroy it and get back at the mother who made her childhood a misery by giving her up..

 

[sirhugs]

in the sequel, does Mom suck on her lactating boobs?

but seriously.. i like it. Very John Irving except smuttier.

 

[selectivemaster]

mmmm I'd love to see that

in the sequel, does Mom suck on her lactating boobs?

but seriously.. i like it. Very John Irving except smuttier.

 

[bisexplicit]

I think it has potential either as a fucking-over-everyone-you-care-about-by-seducing-them tale or, even, as a straight-up nonconsent/rape story.

I'd be interested in reading it either way.

 

[danston]

I think it should definately be a fucking over all the people story.

I'd love to be able to write it myself but I'm not the best writer in the world, but if there are any talented authors out there willing to take up the challenge I'd be happy to have some input if needed.

 

[Guest]

Hmmm... you know, this does sound interesting. I would like to write this, if that is all right.

 

[danston]

Rhen, you're more than welcome to write it, let me know when it is up.

 

[Guest]

I think it will be the next story I write. I have a load of ideas but no plots to go with them. I have one now it seems.

 

[Athena_e19]

I'm a bit confused as to why she would want to sleep with all the sons to destroy them...

Incest is very taboo and considered 'sick' by some, but most guys would have less compunction against it if it was with a half sister they had never known, even if she is dating one of them. Is the revenge in the act of cheating on one brother with another? And the mother's punishment is watching her sons fight? It seems like a better motivation for the antagonist is needed. The boys had little to nothing to do with it, and emotional trauma seems slim for the mother.

My thoughts.

 

[Guest]

I'm going to use the premise, but we'll see how it goes when its finished.

 

[danston]

The whole idea of the revenge angle is that all the sons and the dad fall for her, and when they find out that she has cheated on the son which is her boyfriend with all of the others, that breaks up the family which is revenge on the mother who has to watch her family fall apart.

It doesn't necesssarily come out that she is the girl who was given up, that is just her motive behind her actions..

 

[emap]

Reminds me of a movie I recall watching, or was it a book.

Anyway similar story line, except instead of just screwing them all, she killed them off one by one in 'accidents.'

I know rather sick and twisted, and not terribly much a standard lit story, but would make it easier to have the mom fall apart in despair.

 

[Guest]

I've never read/watched that, but I'm sure that is the plot of at least several books/movies.

 

[sexymathstudent]

How about a story where a woman gives up a girl for adoption as she is too young to raise her..

Then that woman goes onto have a big family with a different man, they have 3 sons together..

i never liked stories with depressing elements like death, loss, adoption,,,...

 

[sirhugs]

i never liked stories with depressing elements like death, loss, adoption,,,...

but that's life...

 

[BedtimeStories77]

but that's life...

Boy is it!

And sometimes life is sexy. Therefore, a truly good three-dimensional story goes into more than just the sex.

 

[J.Q. Hack]

It doesn't necesssarily come out that she is the girl who was given up, that is just her motive behind her actions..

I think it would necessarily have to come out that the girls motive was to destroy the family of the woman that gave her up.

If it didn't the mother would just be totally confused why this happened and why the girl targeted her family. I suspect the readers might feel a little cheated too if it didn't come to a "natural" conclusion with the depth of betrayal revealed for all to see.

I really like this idea and it seems like it has tremendous potential.

J.Q.

 

[MUPPET22]

Sounds like it could be a very interesting story, when is it going to be ready Rhen?

 

[danston]

It seems as though this story has never materialised, anyone else fancy having a go at writing it?

 

[Guest]

I'm still writing it. Just have too many stories I made myself want to write at once. I'm working on this now, though.

 

[MRevelle83]

Actually, though, I'll submit it under this name here. Which reminds me, how can I get rid of my other profile?

 

[emap]

I beleive you have to send a PM to manu, or was it laurel asking them to delete the profile.

 

[danston]

the writer has now pulled out of writing this, anyone else fancy taking it on?

 

[paradox167]

Really hot stuff!!!!!1

Would be a great read for sure!

Did any one write anything regarding this???Hmm?

 

[MRevelle83]

I was the one that pulled out of writing this (hey... ).

I didn't have the time to finish this that I thought I was going to get. Oh well, I know some more seasoned writers here can accomplish this.

I don't have a story at this site at all yet.