Girls Night Out

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A young, sexy Puerto Rican woman (Maria) works at the front desk of a popular salon. A young man (David) comes in weekly for a haircut, and the other girls can see that he has the hots for Maria. She is nice to him, but she’s not attracted to him. The other girls tease her and push her to ask him out, even though they all know that she likes rough, tough biker types and David is the polar opposite of that.

One day David shows up with two tickets to a show that Maria has been dying to see, but can’t afford. He invites her to go and she agrees because she realizes it's the only way she could go. The girls at the shop tease her relentlessly about going with David, but she goes and has a really good time. David is the perfect gentleman and pays for everything.

After that impromptu date, David starts to drop in unexpectedly at Maria’s home, bringing her flowers and other gifts. She is polite to him but always finds an excuse to make him leave and he is always very gracious. One time he shows up with a big bouquet of flowers when the other girls from the salon are visiting, and the girls quickly invite him in, much to Maria’s chagrin. David asks Maria if she would like to go out to dinner at a very expensive restaurant. Trying to think of an easy way to let him down, Maria tells him that her and the girls have a girls night out planned.

Hearing that, one of the other women (Natalie) quickly speaks up and says that David could always tag along with them. Maria reminds her that it is a “girls night out”, and David is not a girl. Natalie insists that they could still have a girls night out and bring David along, all they have to do is make him look like a girl. One of the women (Rachel) is a makeup artist and she takes the challenge seriously.

David and Maria protest Natalie’s idea, but the other women all get behind it and he finally relents and agrees to at least let Rachel attempt to make him passable. The girls find him clothes while Rachel applies beauty makeup and when he finally looks at himself in the mirror, he can’t believe the transformation. He looks stunning.

Although he is still unsure about going out as a woman, the girls talk him into tying it for a little while, insisting that they will all have a great time. They coach him on how to walk in heels and speak more like a woman, then call over a teen neighbor to see if he realizes that David is really a man. Passing that test, he agrees to go out with the women.

Soon they are all at a very popular nightclub. Before he knows what is happening, David is being hit on by some men who think he is a woman. As uncomfortable as he is, the women encourage him to get out and dance with some of the men so he is not labeled a tease. Once again they talk him into doing something that he is not comfortable doing.

What happens to David? Does he wind up on his knees sucking cock for the first time in his life? What does Maria do? How do the girls from the salon react?

Is anyone interested in taking this story idea on?
 
Maria discovers she likes David better as a lesbian. This makes her question her own sexuality, so she convinces one of the other ladies to try lesbian sex with her, just to see it that's where she's really at. During lesbian sex, Maria realizes she wants both, so she lets David fuck her from behind while she's getting the girl off with her hands and kissing her and sucking her tits. Then the third girl (who's been watching and masturbating the whole time) wants to get involved with the lesbian action, so David is relegated to nibbling clits and licking assholes, at least until he can get it up again. Since David is so compliant and easy to get along with, (and doesn't mind licking assholes) (and has a very quick recovery time) he becomes the "designated dick" for when the ladies have their lesbian sex orgies and everyone lives happily ever after.
 
Yeah...that's not the direction I was aiming for SikFuk, but thanks for trying. In my view, David kind of let's himself be led because he wants to spend time with Maria. Maria feels bad because she sees that her friends and coworkers are treating him like shit and laughing behind his back. I'm not sure where to go with it from there, but I could see some tough biker guy who Maria is attracted to going after David, thinking he is a woman. Maria is worried for David and tries to convince the biker to go for her instead. So David wants Maria, Maria wants the biker, and the biker wants David, who he thinks is Dena. Somehow they all end up in a threesome, but Maria thinks that the biker will kill David if he finds out that he has a cock. Meanwhile David and the biker are both drunk, so Maria has to play block and tackle so the biker is none the wiser. An accomplished author could likely pull it off.
 
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