Girl Tax

[Shendude]

This phrase just popped into my head one day, and screamed "make a story out of me!"

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

Hmmmm... sounds like something from the Ann McCaffery, Gor series.

 

[Shendude]

Hmmmm... sounds like something from the Ann McCaffery, Gor series.

Eh?

Gor is the brainchild of John Norman.

Anne McCaffery has nothing to do with it whatsoever.

 

[kircanos]

Could be interesting, sort of a jus primae noctis type thing.

 

[Iggy_Piggy]

'Girl Tax' is a clever title.

One possibility would be that this tax is imposed upon the birth of a female- which leads one poor family to raise their daughter as a male, leading to some predictable complications when the girl become a woman. Sure, it's been done before, but it's still better than the old 'blowjob for grades' plot...

Another might be that this tax is imposed when a girl becomes a woman, to be paid by the young lady's father or suitor- whichever works best for the plot. 'Becoming a woman' could mean reaching marrying age, having sex, getting married, becoming betrothed, etc- again whatever works for the plot.

 

[Shendude]

'Girl Tax' is a clever title.

One possibility would be that this tax is imposed upon the birth of a female- which leads one poor family to raise their daughter as a male, leading to some predictable complications when the girl become a woman. Sure, it's been done before, but it's still better than the old 'blowjob for grades' plot...

Another might be that this tax is imposed when a girl becomes a woman, to be paid by the young lady's father or suitor- whichever works best for the plot. 'Becoming a woman' could mean reaching marrying age, having sex, getting married, becoming betrothed, etc- again whatever works for the plot.

The first possibility that came to mind was a subjugated group having a "girl tax" placed on them, requiring them to hand over some of their most beautiful girls to serve as sex-slaves for their masters.

 

[Iggy_Piggy]

The first possibility that came to mind was a subjugated group having a "girl tax" placed on them, requiring them to hand over some of their most beautiful girls to serve as sex-slaves for their masters.

I see- the girl isn't the subject of the tax, but the method of payment. That could work too.

 

[yevkassem72]

A tax on unmarried daughters, meant to encourage parents to marry off their girls at a certain age (obviously, 18 for this site)?

 

[Athena_e19]

Or the requirement of some bygone time where a noble demands some sort of service from all women before they can be wed. First night type of thing.

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

Eh?

Gor is the brainchild of John Norman.

Anne McCaffery has nothing to do with it whatsoever.

If you were as smart as you thing and could pull your head out of your BDSM ass, you'd know Anne McCaffery wrote some 30 Sci-Fi novels about a Gorian society.

 

[Fantasies_only]

This phrase just popped into my head one day, and screamed "make a story out of me!"

I'm way ahead of you.
This sounds like a mistress swapping club that has a ticket/receipt kind of VIP requirements.

 

[subwannabe]

I too think there is a story in there somewhere.

 

[Shendude]

If you were as smart as you thing and could pull your head out of your BDSM ass, you'd know Anne McCaffery wrote some 30 Sci-Fi novels about a Gorian society.

Hold, up WHAT?

What are these? I've never heard of 'em.

 

[snooper]

Anne McCaffrey

See a complete bibliography here. That should settle matters.

 

[littlesquirt]

maybe a futuristic story....one where the government knows all...like when a girl is penetrated the guy must pay a "Girl Tax". The tax is higher for an unmarried girl, a virginal girl, some one else's wife.....

Within hours of the deed there is a knock at the door....its the Tax Man. Long dark overcoat, dark sunglasses, a dark brim hat. If you don't have then money then.......

 

[Fantasies_only]

maybe a futuristic story....one where the government knows all...like when a girl is penetrated the guy must pay a "Girl Tax". The tax is higher for an unmarried girl, a virginal girl, some one else's wife.....

Within hours of the deed there is a knock at the door....its the Tax Man. Long dark overcoat, dark sunglasses, a dark brim hat. If you don't have then money then.......

That's an interesting twist, and involves sex, but like a previous proposal of mine, I don't see how erotic it could be.
Maybe a good storyline and subplot would make it much better.

You say the government knows all in a literal sense.
How is this possible?
GPS tracking and RFID technology can only go so far.
You make the tax man sound like a perverted Santa Claus, which puts a new meaning on "He sees you when you're sleeping. He knows when you're awake."

 

[littlesquirt]

You say the government knows all in a literal sense.
How is this possible?
GPS tracking and RFID technology can only go so far.

but in the future who knows how close they can be? I mean right now how do you know that someone isn't watching you through your window from far away?

maybe at birth you are implanted with some sort of tracking device which monitors all your bodily functions...especially sex. Thus they know when you are touching yourself, or some else is touching you!

But then the man of the story is a tax evader, somehow manages to disable the device within him, lives underground, the government knows of him but can't track him. He fucks and runs.

Then one day he fucks a "Tax Lady"....

just some quick idea that someone needs to fill in the details.

 

[emap]

Ok, blame this one on my perverted mind. No seriously no clue where this thought came from.

Anyway, alternate universe type thing, there is a war ongoing, either between two countries or two worlds, depends on how you want to do the setting. Now wars are rather men depleting affairs so a tax of sorts is established. It's a 'girl tax' All women from say 18-40 have to have at least one guy cum in them every day they are not pregnant or on their period.

Now of course just picking a day is rather boring, unless you just want to talk about sex.

So how about, you have one woman who has not had sex yet, and the tax man is coming by, she is desperately trying to find a guy to screw her. The penalty can be all sorts of things, though I am rather partial to the tax man does the offending woman, otherwise what is the point of being a tax man.

So of course say, the tax guy is ugly and she doesn't want him, or he is her father, or suppose a rather funner one, she just turned 18 today and has not had sex yet, doesn't want to lose it to the tax guy, the guy she has picked, is sick or different area so she has to scramble around to avoid the tax guy and find her chosen first lover.

 

[Athena_e19]

I like the development of the futuristic society but think that both might be a bit shallow. They would be good for stroke fiction and then its done.

We could be talking about a post-nuclear society where mates (women) are a hard commodity to come by. The new government (essentially a powerful war lord) demands that a man pay a tax on his wife(s) and on his daughter(s). If he fails the tax they can be taken or sold off.

Perhaps there is one rancher who is fairly influential but has the misfortune of having twin girls and doesn't want to just sell them off as is the custom. His struggle could be in keeping his women safe against a whole society of horny semi-mutated men.