Girl looking for people who love to right very detailed story's?

kellyfem18

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Hi :) I am Kelly, I am looking for people who love to right very detailed story's, who uses other people's ideas and makes them a reality.?

Well I like very detailed story's which involve alot of detail about almost everything.

:) So if this is you, and then this is my idea for a story:

A young female college student is struggle for money to pay for tuition and rent. She was kind of desperate. She saw an ad on the notice board at college, which said, "Girls needed to star in amateur adult movies, pays very well to the right girls, then their was a phone number."

She was like any normal young girl she enjoyed sex but having sex with a stranger and on camera for money was something way different, and something she never considered she would ever do. She contemplates for days whether to ring up and to do it, having no luck with finding extra cash, for the mounting bills. She finally agrees to call up and ask how much it pays. The money they offer her is a large amount.

She decides to do it she was desperate for the money, she goes to the address they gave her the next day. She is very nervous and doesn't know what to expect. She is greeted by a guy with a camera in his face already filming her.


Some of the details I would like included in the story, (More details from your own ideas may also be added):
Well I like reading about the characters emotions and feelings throughout
• Well first the guy introduces himself and then invites her in inside the house another guy sits on a big couch.
• He introduces the two of them.
• Then he gets to know her a little to make her feel a bit more comfortable, to relax her nerves.
• Then he makes sure she wants to do this. She is a bit apprehensive about being there but she needed the money.
• He asks if she would mind moving to the bedroom.
• They do and they talk a bit more, comforting her, then they ask her to strip a little bit of clothing off. They always are complimenting her and making her feel very comfortable
• Eventually they end up getting her stripped right down.
• Then he asks would she mind stripping off the other guy, who's wearing a tight plain t-shirt and 3 quarter shorts, and nothing else.
• When the come down out flops a flaccid cock which is 9 inches soft, which eventually ends up 12 inches hard.

• I would like a very detailed piece about how shocked she would be because they never told her about this detail, it was there big surprise.
• She was in so much shock she didn't really want to continue and go through with it now, because she didn't think any normal girl could really be able to take such a giant member.
• They tell her there's is no money if she doesn't at least try.

• It was the hugest thing she'd ever seen. Now she is torn between wanting to continue to earn the money, but also she was wanted to leave because she didn't know how she could take such a giant and monster of a cock.

• She finally agrees to try to, with a option of pulling out.

• Her doubts slowly began erasing as she explore it, and it went from doubts about being able to take his giant member, to one of wanting to, and having to.

• When it comes time to have sex, they make sure she wants to, she feels a little apprehensive but she was willing to try it.

• I don't know if you want to include this detail or not but maybe they offer her more money to have sex with no condom, when it's time to have sex.

• She is also apprehensive about this but she could use the money so she agrees.

• I also like to hear details from each person's point of view in the story.

:) Any questions you'd like to ask me pls don't hesitate to ask me.

So pls email me and let me know if you will right this story.

My address is at hotmail.com under kellyfem18

I look forward to replies very soon.
:) :kiss: :heart:
 
Not for me, since I have difficulty understanding women's minds. However, I would like to say that this is how to present a story idea, with a fair bit of detail worked out. Any writer should be happier with this than with most of the ideas on here, which seem to be only one or two sentences.
 
Thanks Snooper

Hi Kelly I am Linnet.
I have done what you ask, with help from others and they know what they do for me.

I am at present working on two stories for someone else but the person concerned is beginning to piss me off with his negativity, and with what I originally started from he has no right to complain, as the short synopsis he first put to me was, in the words of others not worth bothering with.

Your project intrigues me and I would be happy to discuss it further, email me or message me on YAHOO AIM or ICQ and we will see if we are compatible.


lin :rolleyes:
 
Hi Kelly;

I enjoy writing detailed stories and yours sounds intriguing. I will do my best to take it on, but would also like a few more details. Feel free to contact me via YIM (wolfbennington). It's more important that I get a feel for you particular outlooks, insecurities, turn ons, turn offs, etc than what details you want included. Once I have an idea of how you react to certain things then I can write that interpretation into the story and give you details that you never even realized you were looking for. It may sound arrogant, but it's proven true in the past.

Drop me a line sometime and let me know if you'd like to move forward (or not).

Wolfers...
 
Wolf Bennington said:
Hi Kelly;

I enjoy writing detailed stories and yours sounds intriguing. I will do my best to take it on, but would also like a few more details. Feel free to contact me via YIM (wolfbennington). It's more important that I get a feel for you particular outlooks, insecurities, turn ons, turn offs, etc than what details you want included. Once I have an idea of how you react to certain things then I can write that interpretation into the story and give you details that you never even realized you were looking for. It may sound arrogant, but it's proven true in the past.

Drop me a line sometime and let me know if you'd like to move forward (or not).

Wolfers...

Hi there Wolf Bennington.

This could be interesting I wonder how much our story are alike or different for that matter. :heart:
 
MsLinnet;

You're right; does sound interesting. Maybe after we've each written seperate tales another could be developed by combining them? Just a thought... Please stay in touch!!

ps - love your webpage. SEXY pictures... beautiful woman. Let me know if I can write anything for YOU too?

wolfbennington@hotmail.com

Wolfers...
 
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