Girl In A Birdcage

[Stefan2015]

When Jennifer wakes up completely naked swinging on a perch in a birdcage, she realizes she is now at the mercy of a horrible captor who wants her for pleasure. Is Jennifer able to escape? Or will she have to deal with living out the rest of her days naked in her tiny birdcage?
Anyone wanna help me write this story?

 

[FantasyXY]

The only thing that came to mind when I read this idea was... Does she have to take a shit on newspapers?

Sorry.

 

[Carnevil9]

No doubt the horrible captor will eventually give her a companion: an equally naked, but naturally well-endowed, make captive. Together, they plot their escape. But in the mean time, they need to keep their spirits up and stay in shape, so.......

Actually, this idea reminds me of a classic short story, called "Knock," by Frederic Brown. It starts with: "The last man on Earth sat alone in a room. There was a knock on the door..."

 

[Sean Renaud]

Honestly you need to give more details on what exactly it is you want. Because it sounds like your standard slave story which there is nothing wrong with (insert LC rant about evil rapists on Lit. Insert rant about new mod who promises to delete rape stories but this story will remain because reasons. Now that the obligatory messaging is finished.) that story line. However it's lackng necessary parts.

1. Does she know how she got there or does she literally wake up swinging (and magically not falling) in this cage. It's important for a number of reasons.

2. Does she know her captor or was she just purchased by some Saudi Prince. (What?! Who else buys women. Oh everybody the world over with enough money and I should watch my painful sterotypes? Oh teh well. I'm over it.) Who wants her as part of his harem?

3. How is she treated?

 

[Stefan2015]

Sean,
All good questions. That's why I need help writing this. I'm thinking that Jennifer was captured by an evil wizard from the dark underworld. So it's mythical fantasy mixed with erotic fantasy. I'm thinking, while it's never actually stated that she is raped, Jennifer is used for the pleasure of the wizard. Not only that, but I picture Jennifer as being on display in the wizard's chamber...in many ways like Princess Leia was in Jabba's chamber in Return of the Jedi. In fact, Jennifer's humiliation is part of what turns me on in this fantasy. I even picture guests in the wizard's chamber coming over and offering her a cracker like she really is a bird. "Polly wanna cracker?" Her complete nakedness while hanging in a birdcage in front of a bunch of fully-clothed free men is the ultimate humiliation for Jennifer.
You asked how she's treated. Interestingly enough, while she is an instrument of pleasure for the wizard, I see her being treated well. He treats her like a beloved pet and as long as she's kind and loyal to him, he's kind and loyal back.
Any other ideas?

 

[Sean Renaud]

Okay I'ma stop you right there just encase you end up sticking around these parts for an extended stay.

Most of us have no problem with fantasy or sci-fi or futuristic settings. HOWEVER one must notify the rest of us when you wander off the reservation. Because 2015 (soon to be 2016) America and suburbs is the default unless otherwise stated. You'll know if I meant the inner city, country side or London via me telling you. Kthnx!

I think what you have now is almost more of a side story than a real one unless somethings get altered. There is only so long anybody can write about how it feels to be in a cage, naked, gawked at and ignored in equal parts. . .okay never mind scratch that carry on.

Why is she kind and loyal to him and yet it's necessary to keep her as what appears to be a slave. I've seen the carrot but I the existence of the stick is necessary both to know why she doesn't run (though Wizard duh does just about cover it. I'm pretty sure if Darth Vader tells you to sit down and shut up you fucking do it. But he needs to be willing to) and what reason he has for doing it. Most guys, even guys of sufficient wealth and power don't kidnap chicks when they can seduce them.

 

[Stefan2015]

Sean, I thought this was a site for posting erotic fantasies. I guess I'm confused. Forgive me for being new, but you sound offended by me changing my story idea. You said:
*"Most of us have no problem with fantasy or sci-fi or futuristic settings. HOWEVER one must notify the rest of us when you wander off the reservation."*
I'm confused. Since when does erotic fantasy have etiquette? Why am I angering you and everyone else for submitting a story idea that I like? Isn't that the point? Maybe you should clarify in a "less mean" way tht isn't so patronizing so I can be prepared for future ideas.
Number two: I'm looking for ideas for my story. It may sound like a good side story but I see a lot happening a a main story. I see the wizard reaching into the birdcage to try and molest her and her batting his hand away in anger. I see her writing in a journal and the wizard taking it from her and throwing it in a fire in front of her. I see her trying to escape and the wizard sending guards to capture her as she runs naked through his palace.
Lastly: you stated she wouldn't be loyal. You're right. She wouldn't. But you also asked 2 posts ago how she was treated. I think, IF she's used to her situation, and has been caged for a while, she would be more compliant. Maybe not necessary loyal, but if he's nice to her, she'd be more "compliant." She still wants to be free.
Any more ideas? Can you please submit more without being rude about my apparent lack of etiquette? I'd love to hear more ideas.

 

[EquinoxRising]

Stefan2015, welcome to Lit and the Story Ideas board. Are you looking to become an author here, submitting stories under your user name? Are you hoping to be a "ghost writer" or "idea guy" and seeking an author for tailor-made stories? Are you looking to role play back and fourth with someone (or several someones); and, if so, public or private role plays?

On to the idea: I don't see a "captured slave" as being loyal or kind to his/her captor unless they develop Stockholm syndrome over time. Going down this route, it's possible the site will deny your story since it seems "real rape" would be the only option. (In most people's eyes, that's something that's not erotic. And in the Site Owners' eyes, "the victim must like the treatment by the end" and/or Lit's Non-Consent category is for "fantasies and games of control" only.)

Changing things up a bit, in my opinion, I see this tale as something similar to Anne Rice's Sleeping Beauty trilogy (soon to be a collection of four novels!) in that Jennifer is "sold" to the Mage (wizard) for whatever reason, somehow captured (and similar to SB she is broken down and eventually becomes obedient), or whatever else anyone can think up.

I see the birdcage as something for an elaborate opener to the story. It would draw the reader in and make them question what's going on. It's gilded and beautiful, the swing is soft and padded, and the food "cup" has expensive, decadent foods in it. So, perhaps she wakes up in there after a foggy haze... (Throughout the story, the back-story is added and explains her fate, etc.) The cage, of course, is not her only living quarters. The bathroom needs can either be ignored or explained away as Rice did... (...to "answer" the post about: The only thing that came to mind when I read this idea was... Does she have to take a shit on newspapers?)

This would be a lengthy tale, perhaps with several installments - and that's not a bad thing.