Girl hears unusual voices

eDJ

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I was in the Library the other day, a place where I spend too much time, and heard the young librarian girls giggling over a video. It seems they are all aerobics queens and were amused by this new Rebok advertisement which you can see below. (the seed of this story idea)

http://beltwayblips.dailyradar.com/video/new-reebok-easytone-commercial-boobs/

Ok, now imagine a story where a single working girl's mind begins to hear her tits, ass, pussy, hair, and legs begin to speak to it like her circle of best friends. First they aren't happy with her slothful attitude of late as they feel she isn't putting herself out there enough and they're all going to waste because of it. They are much too proud to let that happen to them and have began to vocalize their issues with it. The voices begin infighting with each while blaming their sister parts for not living up to their potential and causing a deficit in their composite attraction power. Some parts become envious or perhaps depressed at the sight of other women's parts. Meanwhile some of her other parts split into factions harboring anger citing the mind's laziness as the root of the problem.

The girl's mind begins to talk back to the other physical parts and the story unfolds in a erotic comedy where each of the physical parts are taken to task for their Lust, Greed, or Gluttony.

I'm thinking this could generate a cute erotic comedy showcasing the most erotic part of a woman's body....her mind. Anyone else see merit in this idea ?
 
As I read your second paragraph, I began chuckling to myself at the comedy potential. Then you said as much in the third paragraph.

Very good idea you have going here. Can't wait to read it!
:)
Jenny
 
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