Girl gangbanged by whole town

[Hl40029082]

A girl was blackmailed for being caught masturbation.If she didn't do as blackmail wants he would spread the video.So that girl had to do many nasty things such as licking pussy first time

 

[Euphony]

This is painfully nonsensical.

She gets caught masturbating (minor embarrassment) and to not have that secret get out, she's going to allow her privacy and body to be violated in far more depraved manners.

And she's going to trust the people blackmailing her NOT to record her "punishment" nor blackmail her further.

 

[LupusDei]

This is painfully nonsensical.

She gets caught masturbating (minor embarrassment) and to not have that secret get out, she's going to allow her privacy and body to be violated in far more depraved manners.

And she's going to trust the people blackmailing her NOT to record her "punishment" nor blackmail her further.

Well, yes. That's exactly how the blackmail trope works. It's constant escalating, each previous action is used to demand the next, one step worse, then that (and the accumulated corpus) used to demand next step, worse still. With each step the ring of people in the know grow too. The assumption is that at one point the blackmail becomes redundant, she will do what's told without threatening, believing it's now common knowledge she's a total slut and accepting it herself.

It's a rather bad trope that often assault the victim's intelligence, but, I suspect it may not be seen as bug, but a feature, by those who enjoy it.

 

[Euphony]

It's a rather bad trope that often assault the victim's intelligence, but, I suspect it may not be seen as bug, but a feature, by those who enjoy it.

Not opposed to bad tropes but this stretches credulity so hard as to turn farcical.

Masturbation is just so tame, especially assuming this is recently modern (with all the filming/blackmailing going on.) I get the wider the canyon between her starting point to full on sexual servitude adds some oomph but I don't think enough extra is gained by starting so low instead of bumping up a notch. (she's got an OnlyFans and is the town teacher, having an affair with someone in power, etc.)

 

[LupusDei]

Not opposed to bad tropes but this stretches credulity so hard as to turn farcical.

Masturbation is just so tame, especially assuming this is recently modern (with all the filming/blackmailing going on.) I get the wider the canyon between her starting point to full on sexual servitude adds some oomph but I don't think enough extra is gained by starting so low instead of bumping up a notch. (she's got an OnlyFans and is the town teacher, having an affair with someone in power, etc.)

In my (limited) experience with said trope, masturbation is not low at all. It may start with actions or activities that most would see as totally innocent, except the blackmailed person herself. It's used to build and pump how painfully uptight and prudish she is at the start.

 

[LupusDei]

I kinda like the idea, that a girl manage to have sex with literally every adult of a small town and then continue to be free for all cumdumpster anytime afterwards.

But I wonder is it possible to turn it on it's head.

I mean, that it's not that she's forced to, but that it becomes her conscious goal at some point and achievement in own eyes. Sure, she might receive some initial push, not improbably through some embarrassment at some point, and likely with more or less deliberate help by frenemies that not always wish her well. However, to eventually hunt down and seduce the few last prudes that yet haven't fucked her she will have to actively bribe allies for help... offering sexual services of course.

 

[Euphony]

I kinda like the idea, that a girl manage to have sex with literally every adult of a small town and then continue to be free for all cumdumpster anytime afterwards.

But I wonder is it possible to turn it on it's head.

I mean, that it's not that she's forced to, but that it becomes her conscious goal at some point and achievement in own eyes. Sure, she might receive some initial push, not improbably through some embarrassment at some point, and likely with more or less deliberate help by frenemies that not always wish her well. However, to eventually hunt down and seduce the few last prudes that yet haven't fucked her she will have to actively bribe allies for help... offering sexual services of course.

The turning on its head concept is where it starts to gain some traction (and I think shows we've put forth more effort than the op)

So, the blackmail gets the ball rolling. What if, seeing how it influenced her behaviors, she realizes the power blackmail holds.

The whole town is ostensibly under the same social/sexual limitations that kept her down and if she frees herself sexually, then she GAINS that power for herself, as she sees to fit to use.

Every act of depravity gains her sexual autonomy and social currency (as turning her into the "town whore" turns her sexual partners into "town whore patrons." making their own societal currency at risk.

It won't fly as too many here prefer women to stay powerless but it would be far more interesting/unique if the dumpster realizes at some point the value her service adds and builds her own little waste disposal network of similar mousey townswomen turned power entrepreneurs.

Allowing herself to be live railed while taking her mayoral oath of office with hand on the bible could be a treat.

 

[Carnevil9]

I'm guessing the initial blackmail worked because she secretly wanted to do all those depraved things, and this gives her "permission" to do them without feeling guilty. The blackmailer might even be a friend of hers, helping her to get out of her shell. That could be stated explicitly, or it could be kept from the reader until a big reveal at the end.

Maybe, if you really want to push things, she anonymously sent the original masturbation video to someone she was pretty sure would blackmail her with it. You would pretty much need to keep that as a secret for the end of the story.

 

[mish2mash]

The turning on its head concept is where it starts to gain some traction (and I think shows we've put forth more effort than the op)

So, the blackmail gets the ball rolling. What if, seeing how it influenced her behaviors, she realizes the power blackmail holds.

The whole town is ostensibly under the same social/sexual limitations that kept her down and if she frees herself sexually, then she GAINS that power for herself, as she sees to fit to use.

Every act of depravity gains her sexual autonomy and social currency (as turning her into the "town whore" turns her sexual partners into "town whore patrons." making their own societal currency at risk.

It won't fly as too many here prefer women to stay powerless but it would be far more interesting/unique if the dumpster realizes at some point the value her service adds and builds her own little waste disposal network of similar mousey townswomen turned power entrepreneurs.

Allowing herself to be live railed while taking her mayoral oath of office with hand on the bible could be a treat.

Perhaps the town has a secret, and in order to protect it, every male is forced to participate in the gangbang. The idea of being forced to provide blackmail material in order to ensure compliance or to protect a larger secret is an interesting one.

Perhaps the girl isn't just a victim, she believes she's performing a valuable service, even if she's disgusted at the sex.

I think it would be interesting for her to reflect on the character of every male that actually fucks her, as in they'd be her neighbours, shop keepers, people she's known all her life.

 

[Euphony]

Perhaps the town has a secret, and in order to protect it, every male is forced to participate in the gangbang. The idea of being forced to provide blackmail material in order to ensure compliance or to protect a larger secret is an interesting one.

Perhaps the girl isn't just a victim, she believes she's performing a valuable service, even if she's disgusted at the sex.

I think it would be interesting for her to reflect on the character of every male that actually fucks her, as in they'd be her neighbours, shop keepers, people she's known all her life.

I like the degree of difficulty you've gone for here. Personally, I'd struggle with plausibility of why sex with everyone in the town saves it from a horrible fate but I often have high bar to clear issues.

The reflection of sex with her small town, comprised of people she's known well all her life, is utterly fascinating.

Trouble I see (and is common on Lit) is that level of emotional representation clashes with the general level in taste of the premise. (I have plenty of stories like this where I can't drag them over the line b/c I try to mass market a very niche idea/fetish)

Not saying it can't be done but somebody has to really adore the idea to go through the work necessary to stick the landing.

 

[mish2mash]

I like the degree of difficulty you've gone for here. Personally, I'd struggle with plausibility of why sex with everyone in the town saves it from a horrible fate but I often have high bar to clear issues.

The reflection of sex with her small town, comprised of people she's known well all her life, is utterly fascinating.

Trouble I see (and is common on Lit) is that level of emotional representation clashes with the general level in taste of the premise. (I have plenty of stories like this where I can't drag them over the line b/c I try to mass market a very niche idea/fetish)

Not saying it can't be done but somebody has to really adore the idea to go through the work necessary to stick the landing.

They're not doing it to prevent a horrible fate as such, rather the men are participating out of fear.

How about this for a scenario. The town is actually a front for a secret facility run by some unknown organization for some unknown purpose.

The towns people are aware of it, so obviously such a thing would be impossible to keep secret. Even if you paid them, surveilled them, eventually word would get out.

So this unknown organization decides to provide suitable motivation to make sure that all of them (at least the men) are properly motivated to protect the secret.

So every adult male, whether he's rich poor, young or old is forced to participate in this gang bang. In fact once a few of them do it, they make sure everyone else does it as well.

Perhaps it becomes part of the town tradition, a ritual to be repeated regularly that all newcomers need to be inducted.

 

[Euphony]

I mean, yes?

Plausibility is a sliding scale and everybody has their own level, especially forgiving around these parts.

I just see plot holes with too convenient solutions for me.

Girl had latent nympho tendencies "unlocked" by blackmail.
Everyone in town needs to fuck like bunnies for some grand experiment.
Every male is up for it (old, young, gays) and women of the town accept this as price of living here (what does the town offer these people that is so grand in return and not available elsewhere?)

Agency drives plausibility to me and everyone's having their agency stolen out from under them left and right with nary a hint of pushing back (*maybe* the threat of violence keeps it in check but history is rife with true brutal oppression still being met with audacious hope)

I'm aware people don't require believability but it adds real complexity, complication, and stakes which keep readers on board even for the fantastical.

 

[mish2mash]

I mean, yes?

Plausibility is a sliding scale and everybody has their own level, especially forgiving around these parts.

I just see plot holes with too convenient solutions for me.

Girl had latent nympho tendencies "unlocked" by blackmail.
Everyone in town needs to fuck like bunnies for some grand experiment.
Every male is up for it (old, young, gays) and women of the town accept this as price of living here (what does the town offer these people that is so grand in return and not available elsewhere?)

Agency drives plausibility to me and everyone's having their agency stolen out from under them left and right with nary a hint of pushing back (*maybe* the threat of violence keeps it in check but history is rife with true brutal oppression still being met with audacious hope)

I'm aware people don't require believability but it adds real complexity, complication, and stakes which keep readers on board even for the fantastical.

I'm fascinated by the idea of sex being used as a sort of tool to achieve a larger objective. To the extent that people will offer sex out of a sense of obligation and even duty. All of my stories on literotica have that idea incorporated.

Sex has been used as a means of control throughout history, this girl could actually have agency and believe she's fulfilling a larger purpose.

Why everyone in the town would agree might boil down to a simple choice, some 'organization' makes clear to a man that if he doesn't participate then they won't trust him to stay quite. Which would have negative consequences.

I think an interesting part of the story might be how the girl gets people who are struggling to participate such as gay men.

 

[Euphony]

I'm fascinated by the idea of sex being used as a sort of tool to achieve a larger objective. To the extent that people will offer sex out of a sense of obligation and even duty. All of my stories on literotica have that idea incorporated.

Sex has been used as a means of control throughout history, this girl could actually have agency and believe she's fulfilling a larger purpose.

Why everyone in the town would agree might boil down to a simple choice, some 'organization' makes clear to a man that if he doesn't participate then they won't trust him to stay quite. Which would have negative consequences.

I think an interesting part of the story might be how the girl gets people who are struggling to participate such as gay men.

All of these are solid points.
Reluctance to sex as a tool of agency is a writing task for sure.

Fantastical (the scenario) while serving an deep, emotional narrative of reasons for the characters to engage in acquittance sex is a interesting contrast but one also likely to be lost to most readers preferences.

Not to say write for readers alone but personally it's serving two, very different masters to me and I'm not rapt by the idea enough to unwind all the knots needed to get to the underlying silken threads.

 

[lovecraft68]

I think I'm done even clicking on the forum anymore.

 

[Euphony]

I think I'm done even clicking on the forum anymore.

Probably best practices but sometimes absurdity pays unexpected dividends in plausibility land.

The time efficiency, however, is utterly miserable.