Gillstan, in the extreme section.
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Hi there,
I've just finished reading Gillstan part 1 and 2 and so far I like what I've read. I'm not quite sure as yet why it's in the extreme section so far it doesn't seem that extreme to me but then i'm probably not your typical reader -))
There are a few grammatical errors but I can see it shaping into an interesting story and am looking forward to seeing the next chapter as I think that is when the real story here will begin to emerge.
Hope that helps some,
regards,
Jenne64
I've just finished reading Gillstan part 1 and 2 and so far I like what I've read. I'm not quite sure as yet why it's in the extreme section so far it doesn't seem that extreme to me but then i'm probably not your typical reader -))
There are a few grammatical errors but I can see it shaping into an interesting story and am looking forward to seeing the next chapter as I think that is when the real story here will begin to emerge.
Hope that helps some,
regards,
Jenne64
English Bob
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Just read the Gillstan story
Unlike Jenne64, I did find it quite extreme but still definitely erotic.
I wouldn't worry too much about the grammar Ravenloft, It's better than a lot here!!
Keep up the good work
English Bob
Unlike Jenne64, I did find it quite extreme but still definitely erotic.
I wouldn't worry too much about the grammar Ravenloft, It's better than a lot here!!
Keep up the good work
English Bob
Bob,
Maybe I've just read a few a few to many extreme stories lately. -))
I agree with you though that you shouldn't be worried about the grammer to much Ravenloft. I'm still new to writing as well but I found it helpful when someone ointsout the errors of my way as much as when they heap praise on me ( well a girls gotta dream)
Keep up the good work.
Jenne64
I did say I wasn't your typical reader-))
Maybe I've just read a few a few to many extreme stories lately. -))
I agree with you though that you shouldn't be worried about the grammer to much Ravenloft. I'm still new to writing as well but I found it helpful when someone ointsout the errors of my way as much as when they heap praise on me ( well a girls gotta dream)
Keep up the good work.
Jenne64
I did say I wasn't your typical reader-))
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