Frankiezz3
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Hi all,
I've written 5 segments of a series called "Nurse Nancy's Penis Therapy" with some success. I've gotten some positive feedback, requests for "more like this" and was added to a few Favorite Author lists. However, the ratings are consistently in the 4.00 to 4.42 range, and I haven't broken through 4.5 for the coveted "H" rating. Personally, I typically don't bother reading stories without "H" ratings (how much free time can one have?). I suspect many others do this too, and since I'd like more people to see the stories I'd appreciate some advice on how to break through and get more 5 ratings than 4's. IMNSHO these Nurse Nancy (NN) stories are hotter than some of those that receive H ratings, but I'm biased of course so I'd like some 3rd party advice.
The NN stories are meant to be screenplays for porn videos. I'm not going for great literature here, just titillation, which may be the issue but you be the judge. I've included links to the stories below. There are two versions of the first installment--one is written in a script format. I've included the link to that also although I received some initial feedback that the traditional story version is preferred.
I'd appreciate advice from some of the erotica experts on how to improve these and future installments. If you can find the time to read some of these and tell my why you wouldn't give them a "5" rating I'd appreciate it. If you can give them 5's, please do.
Here are the links:
Nurse Nancy's Penis Therapy Series
Part 1: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=418650
Part 2: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=421245
Part 3: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=423104
Part 4: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=450865
Part 5: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=455402
Part 1 - Script version: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=416624
Thanks for your help.
Frankiezz3
I've written 5 segments of a series called "Nurse Nancy's Penis Therapy" with some success. I've gotten some positive feedback, requests for "more like this" and was added to a few Favorite Author lists. However, the ratings are consistently in the 4.00 to 4.42 range, and I haven't broken through 4.5 for the coveted "H" rating. Personally, I typically don't bother reading stories without "H" ratings (how much free time can one have?). I suspect many others do this too, and since I'd like more people to see the stories I'd appreciate some advice on how to break through and get more 5 ratings than 4's. IMNSHO these Nurse Nancy (NN) stories are hotter than some of those that receive H ratings, but I'm biased of course so I'd like some 3rd party advice.
The NN stories are meant to be screenplays for porn videos. I'm not going for great literature here, just titillation, which may be the issue but you be the judge. I've included links to the stories below. There are two versions of the first installment--one is written in a script format. I've included the link to that also although I received some initial feedback that the traditional story version is preferred.
I'd appreciate advice from some of the erotica experts on how to improve these and future installments. If you can find the time to read some of these and tell my why you wouldn't give them a "5" rating I'd appreciate it. If you can give them 5's, please do.
Here are the links:
Nurse Nancy's Penis Therapy Series
Part 1: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=418650
Part 2: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=421245
Part 3: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=423104
Part 4: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=450865
Part 5: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=455402
Part 1 - Script version: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=416624
Thanks for your help.
Frankiezz3
