gordo12
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I continually find myself using sentences with the word as
AS they......
as he......
etc etc etc
Just checked a story and the first 900 words contained 21 "as" usages. At that rate the 9000 words will have around 200 instances. That seems like wayyy tooo much.
Trouble is it seems that as you get rid of "as" it changes the sentence and requires a rewrite.
Any tricks or tips as I tear my hair out in frustration
AS they......
as he......
etc etc etc
Just checked a story and the first 900 words contained 21 "as" usages. At that rate the 9000 words will have around 200 instances. That seems like wayyy tooo much.
Trouble is it seems that as you get rid of "as" it changes the sentence and requires a rewrite.
Any tricks or tips as I tear my hair out in frustration