Getting even with the wife

[Glorieholes]

Hi I'm Gloria and I'm new here. I was thinking of a story that might be good.

This girl, Nancy has a friend, Jeff who's wife, Barbara has been cheating on him. Nancy decides that she wants to help Jeff get even with Barbara by showing her that two can play that game. Nancy is really attractive by any standards and surely more attractive than Barbara.

Nancy's plan is to allow Barbara to see her with Jeff while Barbara is meeting with her lover. Nancy is striking to draw attention without trying.

Every where Barbara meets with her lover she sees Jeff with Nancy. Jeff and Nancy are making out.

Barbara realizes that Nancy is much more attractive and fears loosing Jeff. Barbara breaks it off with her lover and tries to make up with Jeff. Jeff gives her the brush off and begins showing up with Nancy at places he knows Barbara will be.

After making out with Nancy and changing his appearance he finds his self confidence to divorce Barbara and find a woman who is more deserving. Nancy finds that she is the woman for Jeff.

 

[BlackSnake]

I think it might need more interesting plot

 

[emap]

Oh bad black.

Actualy it's not that bad, it's a good starting point to make an interesting story or series.

It of course needs a bit more in the way of details, but it could be the basis for a good story.

 

[GuyJD]

I wrote a similar story, "FOUR CAN PLAY THIS GAME" .

After hiring a private eye, a young African-American wife learns that her husband is having an affair with his white female boss. She decides to confront the "mistress" only to be confronted by the woman's husband instead. He knows of the affair and have plans to leave his wife. The two, the white husband and African-American wife, examines most of the evidence and he gets excited in the process. One thing leads to another and he seduces the younger African-American wife. In addition, I plan to create a part 2 to this story.

 

[BlackSnake]

I wrote a similar story, "FOUR CAN PLAY THIS GAME" .

After hiring a private eye, a young African-American wife learns that her husband is having an affair with his white female boss. She decides to confront the "mistress" only to be confronted by the woman's husband instead. He knows of the affair and have plans to leave his wife. The two, the white husband and African-American wife, examines most of the evidence and he gets excited in the process. One thing leads to another and he seduces the younger African-American wife. In addition, I plan to create a part 2 to this story.

Yeah, that's more what I'm talking about. If Nancy was the wife of the guy that Barbara is having an affair with would make it meatier. But then the question is, other than fucking each other, how do they get even?

 

[GuyJD]

Yeah, that's more what I'm talking about. If Nancy was the wife of the guy that Barbara is having an affair with would make it meatier. But then the question is, other than fucking each other, how do they get even?

The "even" part will come in Part 2, which idea I got from another story on another website. I will write it as the two coaxing their cheating husband and wife to a motel where they will be forced to watch the two have bed thumping sex on the other bed.

Believe it or not, I got the idea of this story from a favorite reality show..........."CHEATERS".

 

[Seduce]

Hi I'm Gloria and I'm new here. I was thinking of a story that might be good.

This girl, Nancy has a friend, Jeff who's wife, Barbara has been cheating on him. Nancy decides that she wants to help Jeff get even with Barbara by showing her that two can play that game. Nancy is really attractive by any standards and surely more attractive than Barbara.

Nancy's plan is to allow Barbara to see her with Jeff while Barbara is meeting with her lover. Nancy is striking to draw attention without trying.

Every where Barbara meets with her lover she sees Jeff with Nancy. Jeff and Nancy are making out.

Barbara realizes that Nancy is much more attractive and fears loosing Jeff. Barbara breaks it off with her lover and tries to make up with Jeff. Jeff gives her the brush off and begins showing up with Nancy at places he knows Barbara will be.

After making out with Nancy and changing his appearance he finds his self confidence to divorce Barbara and find a woman who is more deserving. Nancy finds that she is the woman for Jeff.

I think Agatha Christie wrote something like that (Mr Parker Pyne stories if I remember correctly).

 

[BlackSnake]

I think Agatha Christie wrote something like that (Mr Parker Pyne stories if I remember correctly).

Nice tits...

 

[Seduce]

Nice tits...

Thanks

 

[Glorieholes]

Yeah, that's more what I'm talking about. If Nancy was the wife of the guy that Barbara is having an affair with would make it meatier. But then the question is, other than fucking each other, how do they get even?

You will have to fuck me with that big cock of yours soon babe

 

[BlackSnake]

You will have to fuck me with that big cock of yours soon babe

promises, promises

 

[GuyJD]

Yeah, that's more what I'm talking about. If Nancy was the wife of the guy that Barbara is having an affair with would make it meatier. But then the question is, other than fucking each other, how do they get even?

My bad, when I saw a quote from my post I thought that this post was an inquiry to me. But I don't have a Nancy or Barb in my story. OOOPS!!!

 

[BlackSnake]

My bad, when I saw a quote from my post I thought that this post was an inquiry to me. But I don't have a Nancy or Barb in my story. OOOPS!!!

You've already been there, so your input is most valuable.

 

[Flashlight7.5]

Part 2

The whole "coaxing "Couple A" a hotel and forcing them to watch "Couple B" have sex" thing sounds a bit ludicrous to me. How are they going to force "Couple A" them to watch them? Tie them up and hold their eyes open like Malcolm McDowell in A Clockwork Orange? If not, why would "Couple A" just sit there and watch? Why wouldn't the whole thing blow up into a huge argument (as it most likely would)? If the whole thing dissolves into some fourway, then you've lost the original impetus of the story. Everyone gets off and then asks, "Why don't we do this more often?"

 

[GuyJD]

The whole "coaxing "Couple A" a hotel and forcing them to watch "Couple B" have sex" thing sounds a bit ludicrous to me. How are they going to force "Couple A" them to watch them? Tie them up and hold their eyes open like Malcolm McDowell in A Clockwork Orange? If not, why would "Couple A" just sit there and watch? Why wouldn't the whole thing blow up into a huge argument (as it most likely would)? If the whole thing dissolves into some fourway, then you've lost the original impetus of the story. Everyone gets off and then asks, "Why don't we do this more often?"

Actually, I got the idea from a story called, "Baby". In that story, a gambliholic owes his bookie a shitload of money. His bookie, Baby, threatens to prostitute the guy's wife and teen daughters if he can't come up with the money. Of course, he doesn't have the money and Baby comes to the guy's home to collect, so to speak. But the wife gets very protective of her daughters and tells Baby that he'll have to figure another deal since she's not about to watch her daughters whore for him. Impressed by her protectiveness of her daughters, he offers to wipe the debt clean if she'd bear a child for him. She extends the offer and request to have her husband watch as they have sex so as to conceive his child, which went on for months before she finally became pregnant.

The only difference is that Baby's character is black and the guy and his family are white.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Nice tits...

yup, he's right