blacknwhite6012
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I'm getting back in to writing after a long break and would love some feedback on a short series I wrote some years back.
It's called "The Gold Bikini Club" and is about a couple getting into the interracial cuckold lifestyle whilst on vacation.
https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1475908&page=submissions
Any feedback would be appreciated, whether it's on the writing style or on the themes in the story and how they're portrayed.
Thank you.
It's called "The Gold Bikini Club" and is about a couple getting into the interracial cuckold lifestyle whilst on vacation.
https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1475908&page=submissions
Any feedback would be appreciated, whether it's on the writing style or on the themes in the story and how they're portrayed.
Thank you.
