Getting Away From It All (open)

redhairstacey4u

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NOTE: My goal is for this thread to evolve into a story...with a fantasy and/or sci-fi flavor to it...and a plot. However, if it does go sci-fi I'd like to keep the space operatics turned down--no robots or spaceships blasting everything in sight, or other clichés. I'm not into tentacles--sorry. Ideally any alien invasion would be of the X-Files or They Live variety...i.e., subtle, hidden, and devious. Ditto for fantasy...no bringing my characters land of mysterious butterfly people, please.

I'm also looking for a plot to develop...for a writer willing to engage with my characters and bring his own well-developed characters and ideas to the mix. I'm looking for characters to interact in manners beyond just sex, and develop deeper relationships.

As some of you know, my tastes are for nonconsensual and rough stories, and I'm not into F/F. So if you want to do a fluffy-bunny romance story, or a lesbian piece, I'm not the writer for you. My kinks include gangbangs, interracial, and monster on maiden. One-line posters need not apply.


Bentwood Lake was a tranquil place, a retreat in the coastal hills of California. It was only about twenty minutes from the freeway...one of those few places in the Golden State that was far enough from the beaten path that one could feel like she was getting away from it all, yet still be near conveniences like a grocery store and pizzeria. The lake was just shy of two square miles in size. There was a small campground, and a dirt road encircling about three-fourths of the lake's circumference.

During the summer, the campground had a fair amount of traffic, much of it college kids from the state university 43 miles down the freeway. But in mid-September, the college was back in session, and the campsite crowds dwindled to a few retirees and a handful of locals who were there for the fishing. As summer waned into autumn, the fishing season was over, and the lake was nearly deserted.

It was this tranquility and solitude that drew Peggy, Charlene and Sue to vacation on the last weekend in October. The three friends had arranged to come up to Bentwood Lake because they were sick and tired of the rat race and wanted a place to come to relax. They had rented an RV and just parked it at the campground, on the north side of the lake.

Peggy was 22, a blonde Caucasian real-estate broker who was on the fast track to success. Little by little, she was seeing less of Charlene and Sue. The girls were inexorably going down different paths in life...and while Peggy liked to think she could sup with the country-club crowd while not losing the common touch, the truth was that she already was subtly looking down on the other two girls...

Charlene was 20, and working as a legal secretary. She looked like a redheaded tart, lithe and tall. She was earthy, living in an apartment with a roommate.

Sue was a bartender, with friends in low places. Also a blonde, she definitely had the common touch. Perhaps a little too common, as she had gotten busted once for carrying a concealed weapon...a knife.

NOTE: The ladies are up for adoption...when there is one left, I will take her and play her.
 
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If there is any role for a black dom m in your story , pl let me know
 
SEVERUSMAX said:
Clarence Beaufort
55
6'4"
230 lbs.
Terrorist/Mercenary...leader of MAGE (Men Against Gender Equality), a male chauvinist terrorist group, uses rape as a frequent means of coercion and intimidation....
Born in Durham, NC
Ex-Colonel, U.S. Army Special Forces
Court-martialed, but never caught, for sexual harassment offenses against female officers and enlisted personnel.

ROFLMAO

Interesting idea...but...not really...I'll give you points for creativity. But it sounds like something out of a comic book, and comic books are definitely a big turn-off for me. YMMV.
 
Well, can easily scrap that one....was looking for a villain....will have to come up with something new... ;)
 
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Carl Lansing
37
6'1"
215 lbs.
Shaved Head
Black Eyes
Biracial
Cold-blooded, psychopathic serial rapist
Often recruits petty criminals to help him in gang-rape scenarios
Makes additional money as a day-trader
No criminal record yet
Always kills male witnesses, but doesn't like to kill women...can't bring himself to eliminate potential repeat victims...
Carries a 9 mm Beretta and silencer/suppressor for executing witnesses...including accomplices...
 
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Chris, m/42 5ft 11,muscular, partial to tall white,tarty blondes . Just separated from his white russian girlfriend . She couldnt cope with Chris's daily anal assault and felt some time away to recover was what she needed.

Chris wanted to take time off and had heard of the resort at Bentwood Lake where he had booked a luxury appartment for the fortnight. His pharmaceutical business was doing very well and he thought he deserved a break.His only regret was that he did not have a white girl with him to spend the fortnight. However being the everlasting optimist he hoped he would find some white woman at the resort whom he could dominate. He therefore always carried his extra suitcase containing miscellaneous items like chains, clamps, ropes , dildoes etc.

he parked his merc on the driveway and carried his 2 suitcases with ease in to his new residence.
 
:devil: Cool....two brothers in this thread.... :D Well, mine is only a half-brother, as in biracial...but, still....
 
Sounds yummy...at least for the brothas. ;-)

Charlene was the first of the three to go off...there was a small country-club type resort, secluded from the rest of the lake. The girls had forgotten to pack any beer, and so Charlene had decided to get herself a case. It was only a short walk to the resort, which had a small store. Entering the place, she made her way to the counter. She noticed the clerk fiddling with the TV set...the picture was snowy. The clerk was a youngish Caucasian man with spiky hair and oversized earrings. Flipping a channel, he then came to a message that said "Please Stand By."

"Damn cable's out," the man remarked. "Will that be all for you?"
 
Chris was waiting in the lounge for his appartment to be ready as he watched a tarty redhead walking sexily towards the store. He felt good. He even felt a warmth in his loins as his eyes strayed on to her bust. He was more pleased to see that she was not escorted. He was trying to think of an excuse to approach her.
 
Charlene plopped the beer down on the counter...gave the clerk a bemused look. He fiddled with the TV again, then gave up. He rang up the purchase, and then Charlene had the beer up under her arm as she walked out.
 
As Charlene turned around I appraoched her. "Hi.. you are carrying some heavy weight. Let me help you" I said as I smile and let my eyes wander over your body.
 
Carl Lansing

Carl Lansing didn't let on about his purpose, as he carefully stalked the resort. In his old days, before losing his badge, he had been a detective with the Arizona Department of Public Safety (DPS). He was well-trained in covert tactics, both from that and his old Marine Force Recon days. Police brutality charges had ended his career, but he had simply turned private eye for a while and day-trader.

He was now wealthy enough to be semi-retired from the investigation business, so he was able to devote himself to his pastime: the rape of chosen girls and execution of any male witnesses/accomplices. His old Beretta 9 mm, equipped with a silencer/suppressor, was the only real weapon that he needed for that, as he cleanly and efficiently disposed of any man who might testify against him. It had the double benefit of scaring any rape victims into silence. He also owned a field knife, but rarely had to use it. There were other tools, but those were the main ones.

Carl was a total psychopath/sociopath, with zero compassion or empathy toward anyone, along with no conscience, guilt, or remorse. He could kill half a dozen men, rape a few women, and destroy the evidence, after which he would sit down for a hearty breakfast of steak and eggs (he tended to do his crimes at night, of course). He usually robbed his murder victims, too, to not only help him with liquid cash (so as not to draw on his bank account too much), but also create the impression that they were killed for cash. He never robbed his rape victims, however, since that would be evidence that he had contact with them. He didn't even take souvenirs, as his photographic memory helped him recall every delicious moment of the assaults.

He simply used the accomplices to help him rape the women, then swiftly shot the men (usually in the back of the head), robbed their corpses, cleaned them up, sedated the women, released them, and left before they could return to consciousness. That was his standard MO. It was clean, efficient, and professional in style. He never used protection. He didn't have to. No woman had yet come forward, because they were always too terrified of a man capable of killing his partners in crime.

By now, he'd been doing this for 5 years, and was becoming an expert at it. It gave him an adrenaline rush, to commit violent crimes, outsmart his victims and the police, and get away with it, without every even being a suspect. He had never even been questioned by police. It was always a clean getaway. There was no tie between the rape victims and the murder victims, since the rape victims never pressed charges. There was no suspicion that they had even met each other.

He just hoped that this plan would work. A resort like this was tricky. He'd have to deal with a private security department. He maintained his composure, however, not wishing to give himself away. He wasn't nervous or anxious. He was calm, cool, and collected, as always. This would be another clean kill, if he did it right. Any security guard who encountered him would be executed immediately and disposed of.....
 
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As Charlene turned around I appraoched her. "Hi.. you are carrying some heavy weight. Let me help you" I said as I smile and let my eyes wander over your body.

The redhead looked at Chris. As she turned, her hair swished. Hers was not just any look. It was The Look. That look from a white girl said, louder than words, "I don't do black guys."

To her credit, she was polite. "No, thank you, I've got it." Her voice was sweet, but carried an edge of finality to it, adding the unspoken ending, "and please don't bother me anymore, thanks." She walked out the door and through the parking lot.
 
Peggy layed back on her stomach in her small pink bikini...

Looking at her nails she cleaned and trimmed and filed them

Wondering why she had come on this trip.....she hated camping and now she was alone waiting for the others to return. Atleast they would have beer and maybe being a bit tipsy would make this trip more tolerable....

Legs bent up cutely....her round firm perky breasts pushed nicely together in her small bikini top...

Sighing she rested her head on the folded up towel...
 
redhairstacey4u said:
The redhead looked at Chris. As she turned, her hair swished. Hers was not just any look. It was The Look. That look from a white girl said, louder than words, "I don't do black guys."

To her credit, she was polite. "No, thank you, I've got it." Her voice was sweet, but carried an edge of finality to it, adding the unspoken ending, "and please don't bother me anymore, thanks." She walked out the door and through the parking lot.

Chris registered 'The look' in his brain for future reference. Her attitude just pumped some adrenaline in to his body. "Sure baby" he said. Just followed her at a distance making sure she coudnt notice him. He felt it important to know where she lived in order to formulate plans to capture her for his personal pleasures. He followed her up to the camping grounds and from behind a bush saw her enter the RV. He turned around and noticed that his suite had a direct view of the camping grounds and was pleased to note that he had got his binoculars with him. Having achieved his objective he walked back to the resort. He noticed a 6ft biracial guy outside the resort whom he suspected was going to stay at the resort."Hello there," he said and waved and carried on towards his suite. The guy waved back to him.
 
Carl Lansing

Seeing the black stranger didn't exactly bother Carl Lansing. This brother could be the sort of accomplice that he could use for this little plan of his, if he proved to be of like mind.

"Hey, there," Carl approached the man stealthily and signalled for him to be quiet....so as not to draw attention to them.
 
"Hi there, Im Chris." said Chris offering the stranger his hand. Are you staying at the resort too?
"Why dont you join me at my suite for a drink?" He said smiling .
 
Carl Lansing

chrisde said:
"Hi there, Im Chris." said Chris offering the stranger his hand. Are you staying at the resort too?
"Why dont you join me at my suite for a drink?" He said smiling .

"I'm visiting, but I wouldn't mind a drink. Thank you. Carl Lansing. I'm a private investigator. Nice to meet you, Chris. I'm tracking someone for her husband. He thinks that she might be cheating on him, with a woman, no less. I see no evidence, personally, but I'll take his cash," Carl Lansing mixed lies with the truth. Any background check would confirm that he was a PI and cases were always confidential. Chris would have no reason to doubt it. He wouldn't try yet to pull him into his rape scheme. He'd have to get the man to commiserate with him.....maybe use the race card, if he needed. Once they were buddies, he'd rope him into it.
 
Chris led Carl to his luxurious suite and invited him in. Chris was hoping to rope Carl in to his plans of teaching the bitch he met earlier a lesson. He did take what Carl said at face value but he knew that he would check on it later through his friends in the private investigation industry.

He led Carl past the luxurious lounge towards the sitout where there was a small bar. "Help yourself to a drink Carl." he said as he looked towards the camping ground. He disappeared in to the bedroom and returned with some powerful binoculars.

Directing the binoculars towards the camping ground he noticed a blonde in her pink bikini.
 
Carl Lansing

"Thanks," Carl replied, before getting himself a drink.

Seeing the binoculars, he had to comment....."Nice equipment there, pal. Rather impressed." There were better ones, but not too many. Was Chris a Peeping Tom....without a surveillance based job, that was the only other conclusion that Carl could reach....maybe he would very easy to entice to help him rape the available women....he'd probably know more about them, too...
 
Watch this pretty sight man, siad Chris. He handed Carl the binoculars and disappeared in to his bedroom for a full 15 minutes. Carl was enjoying the sight of the blonde who had slipped off her bikini top to sun her breasts.

Chris returned with a broad smile. Hey Carl I have done a background check on you and I am glad to say you are exactly the person I was looking for.
 
Carl Lansing

"I am, eh? And what is that? I saw that look that blonde gave you. Fuckin' racist, ain't she? You want revenge against her and figure that a half-black ex-cop with a history of brutality might come in handy.....Well, even before being a private dick, I did use to bend the rules a little. Otherwise, I'd still be on the force," Carl grinned, liking Chris....wishing that murder wasn't necessary.....could this be an exceptional case, where he wouldn't have to kill his accomplice?
 
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