Gentle Female Doctor Story

[JGS0903]

I am both a Registered Nurse as well as a professional writer. As an RN, I have found plenty of fodder for medical scenes that cross that line of professionalism. No, the line is never crossed, but the opportunity is there. But, medical fantasies are among my favorite ones.

What I am contemplating writing is a story from a 3rd person POV. A female doctor with a male patient suffering from physical ailment in the groin area. Turns out the man has not ejaculated in years. The lady doctor performs a complete genital and prostate exam. She has compassion and during the exam "allows" the man to climax in her hand.

The female lead is soft, gentle compassionate, yet in total control over the whole situation. The male is reserved and submissive. What I am seeking is to be realistic, yet crossing the line in the name of compassion.

Does this sound plausible? I plan some build up to the characters before things get erotic. Do others find that character development is worth the time and space? Is 3rd person POV best or should I write it from the Doctor's viewpoint? Or has the medical thing been overdone by crass and unbelievable stories?

The story has an outline completed. Also the characters have descriptions and personalities (most of which won't be in the story). I believe that characters need to become "real" in your mind before being in a story. If you don't know how they think, you can't be believable.

Feedback is welcome.

Jessica Summers (my pen name)

 

[MrSwift]

Hi, sounds good, and moving from compassion and care to something more engaged and sexual is interesting. Medical fantasies seem quite powerful, we want the care and the control medics have over our bodies but we also want to eroticise that.
Good luck with the story, tell me how it progresses.

 

[ef_oh_ex]

I am both a Registered Nurse as well as a professional writer. As an RN, I have found plenty of fodder for medical scenes that cross that line of professionalism. No, the line is never crossed, but the opportunity is there. But, medical fantasies are among my favorite ones.

What I am contemplating writing is a story from a 3rd person POV. A female doctor with a male patient suffering from physical ailment in the groin area. Turns out the man has not ejaculated in years. The lady doctor performs a complete genital and prostate exam. She has compassion and during the exam "allows" the man to climax in her hand.

The female lead is soft, gentle compassionate, yet in total control over the whole situation. The male is reserved and submissive. What I am seeking is to be realistic, yet crossing the line in the name of compassion.

Does this sound plausible? I plan some build up to the characters before things get erotic. Do others find that character development is worth the time and space? Is 3rd person POV best or should I write it from the Doctor's viewpoint? Or has the medical thing been overdone by crass and unbelievable stories?

The story has an outline completed. Also the characters have descriptions and personalities (most of which won't be in the story). I believe that characters need to become "real" in your mind before being in a story. If you don't know how they think, you can't be believable.

Feedback is welcome.

Jessica Summers (my pen name)

Not only plausible, this story sounds like it could be very hot, especially if the descriptions and personalities (think of these as literary Medical histories) are at least alluded to in your story.
Please PM me for additional thoughts...

 

[Privates1stClass]

I am both a Registered Nurse as well as a professional writer. As an RN, I have found plenty of fodder for medical scenes that cross that line of professionalism. No, the line is never crossed, but the opportunity is there. But, medical fantasies are among my favorite ones.

What I am contemplating writing is a story from a 3rd person POV. A female doctor with a male patient suffering from physical ailment in the groin area. Turns out the man has not ejaculated in years. The lady doctor performs a complete genital and prostate exam. She has compassion and during the exam "allows" the man to climax in her hand.

The female lead is soft, gentle compassionate, yet in total control over the whole situation. The male is reserved and submissive. What I am seeking is to be realistic, yet crossing the line in the name of compassion.

Does this sound plausible? I plan some build up to the characters before things get erotic. Do others find that character development is worth the time and space? Is 3rd person POV best or should I write it from the Doctor's viewpoint? Or has the medical thing been overdone by crass and unbelievable stories?

The story has an outline completed. Also the characters have descriptions and personalities (most of which won't be in the story). I believe that characters need to become "real" in your mind before being in a story. If you don't know how they think, you can't be believable.

Feedback is welcome.

Jessica Summers (my pen name)

Jessica, I think you have a winner. There are quite a number of patient/nurse stories posted here which are totally unbelievable. However, there are few which emphasize the compassionate feelings of the female doctor/nurse. I'd suggest you provide the reader with only enough information to know the man's history and why he hadn't ejaculated for such a long time and the doctor knows that history. You might do that with dialogue.

By using 3rd person, you could portray both character's thoughts and feelings, while 1st person limits you to either character's, but not both. However, even with 1st person, you could possibly use dialogue to give readers the other character's thoughts.

As an aside, I was in a hospital ICU for more than three weeks. It seems the same very pleasant nurse came by to give me a sponge bath every few days. I was bandaged and connected to IV's and various other hospital plumbing which kept me from using the shower. Of course the first time she washed my cock and balls, I got hard. I was embarrassed and told her so. She said not to worry, it happens all the time.

During the next couple weeks when she bathed me, I got hard every time. She was very professional, but it did seem she spent more time down there ensuring my foreskin was squeaky clean while I was hard as steel. Toward the end of my stay, I hadn't ejaculated for three weeks, and the last time she washed me I was close to erupting.

 

[JessWilson1985]

I need to let you know that in trying to update an email address, I had a SNAFU. I had to re-register with a new name. JGS0903 is now JessWilson 1985. I apologize if this causes confusion or questions about me.

I want to thank those who responded and wonder if anyone would be interested in reading a draft copy and provide some feedback. Please note, this has not gone through a complete edit process. Only Grammarly and Word has touched it. PM me if you would be interested. And I can PM you the story.

Jessica Summers

 

[HeyAll]

I love the medical theme as well, and I've written several of them.

It's actually a popular genre in erotic, the medical theme. People really love it.

As for pov, both work. But people do like the female pov whenever possible.

As for buildup, medical stories don't need a lot of build up IMO. But with all erotica, it's best to set up the characters and the premise.


Also, I would love to edit this if you need. Let me know.

 

[sdsioux]

post on lit

good idea. as was noted in porn very popular subject.

 

[LP1957]

patient

If you would feel comfortable writing it in the sexual role playing room I would take the part as your patient.

 

[Hypoxia]

Despite my long-ago term as a civilian EMT and military medic, I have strong personal reasons not to write "sweet nurse" stories, as a nurse-patient relationship broke up my family when we kids were adolescents. I try to keep bitter reality from my tales. Think of the consequences of your sweet nurses.

 

[JessWilson1985]

Despite my long-ago term as a civilian EMT and military medic, I have strong personal reasons not to write "sweet nurse" stories, as a nurse-patient relationship broke up my family when we kids were adolescents. I try to keep bitter reality from my tales. Think of the consequences of your sweet nurses.

Hypoxia,
I do truly understand where you are coming from. My marriage dissolved because of my nursing career. I respect that you keep your past out of your tales. However, I write of fantasies where reality can be bent. The truth is NO medical person with ANY conscience, morals, or decency would EVER cross the line.

I write erotica for fun. It's a break from the reality of life and death in the ER, ICU, and NICU.

 

[lustatopia]

Jessica, it sounds like the intimacy of the situation, plus the fact that it could have a whole lot of technical medical situational stuff in it - especially if you want to play on the hospital nurse fantasy angle - means that it would be more authentic and powerful to put your female doctor, complete with her jargon as well as her heart-felt emotions, there on the spot. First person narration.

If you want to make this believable, the Doctor is the expert you need to explain, in her own words, how such a thing could occur... Perhaps as if she is confessing her secret to a layperson girlfriend over a bottle of wine months later. You'll need empathy, humor, context and a sense of flow.

This, of course, makes it harder to write structurally because you don't have that easy plug-in grid of a 3rd person narrator, but you don't want that distance. You want a live-action being there experience.

3rd person narration works best if you have a big story, like a historical drama jumping around from, say, the parliament floor to the front line troops to deep under the North Sea in a German U-boat.

Your story is about two people. In a room. In a hospital. It's personal.

 

[Yerkiddin]

If he were a widower, that could certainly cause him to be severely depressed, and in a way where "crossing the line" might just be the therapy he needed most...

 

[NaughtySouthernGent]

I am both a Registered Nurse as well as a professional writer. As an RN, I have found plenty of fodder for medical scenes that cross that line of professionalism. No, the line is never crossed, but the opportunity is there. But, medical fantasies are among my favorite ones.

What I am contemplating writing is a story from a 3rd person POV. A female doctor with a male patient suffering from physical ailment in the groin area. Turns out the man has not ejaculated in years. The lady doctor performs a complete genital and prostate exam. She has compassion and during the exam "allows" the man to climax in her hand.

The female lead is soft, gentle compassionate, yet in total control over the whole situation. The male is reserved and submissive. What I am seeking is to be realistic, yet crossing the line in the name of compassion.

Does this sound plausible? I plan some build up to the characters before things get erotic. Do others find that character development is worth the time and space? Is 3rd person POV best or should I write it from the Doctor's viewpoint? Or has the medical thing been overdone by crass and unbelievable stories?

The story has an outline completed. Also the characters have descriptions and personalities (most of which won't be in the story). I believe that characters need to become "real" in your mind before being in a story. If you don't know how they think, you can't be believable.

Feedback is welcome.

Jessica Summers (my pen name)

As a guy who reads stories here, I always like the female POV and I like first person. Also with your experience as an RN you could throw in a few 'technical terms' to make the story more believable.

 

[Specula]

Jessica - the concept is excellent. If you would like further comments, feel free to ask. Dick

 

[L8KNIGHT726]

Backstory

I think your doctor's backstory is important and helps keep the story erotic not clinical.

I think your Doc is holistic...total mind body connection. That really perceptive part of her sees that it is more than just not cumming...a kind of mental and spiritual block.

What if he no longer sees himself as a sexual person...her seduction is leading him to see her as undeniably attracted to him...that he is the one seducing her.

That's part of her compassion...that she doesn't just make him cum...she brings him to life again.