Geez! Scathing reviewers

[kinkspeak]

All right, after posting my first erotic story anywhere anytime, I got two reviews. One is from a man, who seemed to have loved it, at least the content of it.
The other from these two girls who just said it was pure trash and that it kept them laughing.
If you two are reading this, explain to me why you said it was. It's too easy to say something like that without backing it up. I don't mind scathing reviews as long as they give an argument for their premise.
I realized two days after posting the story that there were some flaws in it and that I should have asked for editing help before posting it but too late now.

 

[pixiesjuice]

Laura & Lisa by any chance?

 

[kinkspeak]

Laura & Lisa by any chance?

yeah! how'd you know?

 

[kinkspeak]

misplaced apostrophes

I know I am being thoroughly petty here and really shouldn't pay those girls any mind but in this instance, can't resist.

They need to go back to elementary school and learn the proper usage of an apostrophes. In their review of my flawed story, this is how they spell Canadians - "Canadian's".

Enough said, excuse me while I go flip my hair in a huff a la Miss Piggy.

 

[pixiesjuice]

The charming duo have read and sent feedback on a few of my stories, apparently i write so badly that they can't bring themselves to vote at all, but they still embroil themselves in the characters lives... ah well



It's safe to say that you're not the only one, check out authors hangout, i think there's a thread devoted to them in there.